A Little Feedback Please

Mar 17, 2016 17:43

Today I found a notebook/journal that belongs to a character in one of my worlds.


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thnidu March 17 2016, 06:53:46 UTC
Urgh. Sorry, but none of that is the least bit familiar to me. Whatever that setting is, I'm a stranger there myself.

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rix_scaedu March 17 2016, 07:25:17 UTC
It's a new setting for me too. Do you fancy somewhere inland with the possibility of mountains or a scenic coastline with functional harbours?

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thnidu March 19 2016, 03:24:56 UTC
The latter.

Call the city Pamaki?
Words in the language of Heldigo must begin with a consonant?

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sauergeek March 19 2016, 04:00:10 UTC
I am leaning toward the inland city, but I kind of want the inland city to have a major river port. A city that's there for something like the historic reason that St. Louis (major river confluence) or Louisville (impassable cataract in a major river) exist.

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