SPN fic: One False Move

[rivkat]

For reasons that don't need exploring at this juncture, I feel kinda crappy. So: a sequel to Knight Moves.

NC-17 -- same warning: if you don't read Sam/Dean, don't read this.

Comments

[ainsley]

That's fabulous! (And, after the last one, I read enough about the show to better understand the stuff with the demon.)

[rivkat]

Thank you! Deal-fic is pretty heavy on the ground -- and why not, since it makes great story fodder?

[astolat]

yay yay yay! \o/

Also because I didn't mention before, I love:

This was unusually twisted, even by Winchester standards. Hell, it was unusually twisted by Voldemort standards.

heeeee

[rivkat]

Thanks! Perhaps I should have said "by Dick Cheney standards."

[giandujakiss]

Oh, yay! I'm glad everyone was saved! And Sam's first realization that the Impala and Dean had switched places was hilarious - so well done!

[rivkat]

I think I ruined astolat's day with the first version. She resurrected the Impala by clapping her hands and believing! Or maybe now we have to say "by chanting 'Impala' in unison with the rest of the world"!

[cryptoxin]

This is both deliciously surreal and unexpectedly moving, with all the hallmarks of your writing (pitch-perfect voice, deft details, subtle/non-anvilly psychological insights into characters & relationship dynamics...). It's a terrific complement to Knight Moves -- plus I love the Suzanne Vega song that you riff off with the titles & lj-cut text! Of course, now I'm hoping for a postscript called "Impala on the Wall"....

[rivkat]

Thank you! Only you have put the terrible idea into my head that the proper postscript would not be Impala on the Wall but Impala on the Ceiling.

[goldenseal]

YAY SAVED! I was hoping for a happy ending:) although I'd like to see a coda in which sam and dean actually get it on as each other:D
loved this story!
xoxoxo

[rivkat]

Thank you! I think I'm done here, because it was all about the car this time. But I am not done with SPN.

[astolat]

I just casually and in no way hintingly point out that there could be something lovely where they are working on the car some late afternoon together, and their hands brush against each other, and there is maybe a little purr from her engine underneath them, and then sex in the back seat (which clearly she can perceive in great detail).

*coughs*

[very_improbable]

I am also in no way whatsoever hinting when I make note of the fact that we have now seen these relationships from the point of view of the three relevant characters, leaving one POV so far unwritten...