Comments | riverside_hq: Er, it was supposed to be a contest entry...

slob_child in riverside_hq

Er, it was supposed to be a contest entry...

Oct 30, 2007 23:11

but I forgot about time zones and missed the deadline! Oops. Oh well, it's finished and might as well go up. I hope everyone who reads, enjoys. Rated R for language and content.

Part One - In Which Zan is Conflicted and Star Cooks Breakfast Part Two - In Which Lexi is a Zombie and Kevin is Most Definitely Not Bruce Lee Part Three - In Which Bill Wears ( Read more... )

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anonymous_bosh October 31 2007, 07:12:02 UTC

Whoa. I am SERIOUSLY impressed!

slob_child October 31 2007, 07:21:22 UTC

*blushes* I hope you enjoy it if you have the time to read it. I seriously adore your artwork (both in Metanoia and elsewhere), and wish I could be that good with pencils, inks, paints... Unfortunately, the majority of my (questionable) skill lies in words. Anyways, thank you!

anonymous_bosh October 31 2007, 09:00:11 UTC

Oh, I read it! You caught the voices of the characters wonderfully! Jane, Lexi, Gina, Milo - Everyone! Even the minor characters! And the costumes and the magic made me grin. Poor Edward. Poor Kevin. *snicker*

Anyway, you inspired me to draw chibis. They'll be inked and up soon, I bet.

slob_child October 31 2007, 09:07:11 UTC

Oh my goodness! YAY~! CHIBIS! I can't wait to see them!

Hee, I'm SO glad that I managed somewhat decent characterization. I was the most if-y on the Gina parts, given that we've only caught brief glimpses of her, but as the baby of the group, I figured she would act a little bit like a spoiled brat. And the Milo parts pretty much wrote themselves. And then I thought the Star parts were a little bit too non-ass-kicky (that's not a word...), but figured, emotional trauma trumps tough guy routine. Thanks so much for the reassurance!

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gomichan October 31 2007, 08:30:38 UTC

Oh. My. God.

I'll praise your wonderfulness more coherently when I've caught my brain. It leapt out of my head and is currently dancing around the house singing "I Feel Pretty".

Wow. O,O

slob_child October 31 2007, 08:56:08 UTC

Heee. Thank you so much! And thank you for letting all of us play in your playground. I've enjoyed it entirely too much. I really, really hope you like my fanfic; and if you don't, then I really hope you'll lie to me.

anonymous_bosh October 31 2007, 09:01:18 UTC

Jesse is, fortunately or unfortunately, about as honest as they come. And he TOTALLY squealed and laughed out loud at parts of this. I was at the table with him as he read. I tell truth!

slob_child October 31 2007, 09:25:08 UTC

*blush* D'awww... I can't tell you how happy that makes me. I am just grinning like a fool over here.

potatoe1988 October 31 2007, 11:04:15 UTC

Wow, I LOVE it. Very emotional. I'd vote for this, if I could.

slob_child October 31 2007, 11:27:42 UTC

Aww, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it... I was trying to balance "emotional" with "humorous" at the beginning, but toward the end, the humour mostly fell by the wayside. Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to say you liked it!

sassinak_wf October 31 2007, 16:09:27 UTC

Oh. My. God. That was amazing. Seriously.

slob_child October 31 2007, 21:18:34 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

skysinger918 October 31 2007, 16:40:52 UTC

friggen W.O.W!!!!!

coherent thought has wandered away and may not be back for some time.....

slob_child October 31 2007, 21:19:37 UTC

Haha, thanks so much! I hope no one is confused by your lack of coherency...