The Chosen One, Part II

[rivercrossing2]

Prompt: #46 (see master prompt list).
Pairing: None; House/Wilson friendship.
Category: Hurt/Comfort
Rating/Warnings: R, for graphic description of child abuse (nonsexual)...spoilers for "The Social Contract" of Season 5.  
Words: This part: 3,760 (6,780 in all)
Summary: When Wilson's estranged Uncle suddenly passes, Wilson is forced to remember a

Comments

[thelonemascot]

I enjoyed this story, I really liked how supportive and understanding House was to Wilson. You wrote both Wilson and House in character very well

[rivercrossing2]

I'm not upset by that at all...I didn't have a beta, so I risked these kinds of mistakes that (unfortunately) I didn't notice myself before I posted. *headdesk*

I'm glad you pointed those things out...or I might not have caught it. (I should just say 'suite' instead of 'tux', shouldn't I?) And yeah, there's a couple of things I could just do away with that should have got axed on the cutting room floor. Hey: maybe I should sign you on as my beta! (if you don't mind that is...)

[thelonemascot]

Whew, good...thought I'd scared you off for a second there. No, I don't mind being a beta. I'm always happy to help.

....and it's suit, not suite. GAH! *rips off editor cap* That's enough out of you!

[rivercrossing2]

LOL! No you didn't scare me, silly...and thank you very, very much!! :)

[thelonemascot]

You're very welcome. :D

[thelonemascot]

Blah, I forgot to mention, I went back over your story and noticed the changes you made. I like them.

Good job. :)

[rivercrossing2]

Cool! Thanks. I'm glad. :)