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river919

Life, Later (11/?)

Nov 09, 2009 13:27

11.

Bras. Honestly, I understand their necessity, I do! But still I think those wacky feminists in the 70’s had the right idea. Let’s burn them! Fire, pretty. Bras on fire, prettier. Silvia’s wearing a bra today and I’m inconsolable. I mope around the precinct, cursing the fact that I never really took up smoking in my misspent youth, like any ( Read more... )

lhdp, pepa silvia fanfiction

Comments 26

pepsilove64 November 9 2009, 13:47:37 UTC

Hi, welcome back. Thank you I needed to read this, wasn't feeling to good today but you made me smile
Pepa her flowers, bras and fire lol. Great chapter
More soon Please

river919 November 10 2009, 20:10:31 UTC

Hey, I'm truly glad last chapter helped a little and made you smile. :-) More already up, hope you enjoy. :-) And thank you for reading & taking the time to comment.

silviaslabcoat November 9 2009, 14:27:20 UTC

I'm so glad your back I have missed you and your story so much.

Your writing is great!! I always have a great laugh at this fic so thanks for that.

Please try and update soon!!

river919 November 10 2009, 20:13:10 UTC

Thank you for the warm welcome back. :-) Missed ya guys too. Glad this fic makes people laugh. :-) Enjoy next chapter. Thank you for reading & commenting. :-)

junebuggy01 November 9 2009, 15:19:15 UTC

OMG!!! This was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo(You think that's enough o's? Cause I would do infinity of them!) FUCKING HILARIOUS!! God I missed your story. I don't know what made me laugh the most, but I think it may have been the eyes glazing over part... Hmmm... or the "SHUT THE FUCK UP! IMBECILES!" part... hmmm... or the visual I get of Sara twirling around the precinct, flowers in tow! *Sighs* I don't know which.... but Iknow that I fucking missed you and this story River!

mauvebeads November 9 2009, 18:20:37 UTC

I wonder whatever happened to Teenagers....and Resurrection....

LOL! junebuggy01 November 9 2009, 18:22:59 UTC

F@#k off Mauve! They're on vacation with my muse! xD

Re: LOL! selinakris November 10 2009, 14:16:27 UTC

was just thinking the same thing mauvebeads. *snickers*

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qosmio18 November 9 2009, 15:45:08 UTC

Burning bras? Lol

How arrogant of Sara to think those flowers are from a teenage boy. Yeah right. Good kisser or not teenage boys don't think like that. Only hot brunettes. Lol

Wow Sara and Pepa are crazy. A duel challenge to the death for flower rights. Lol. Aww Silvia comes in the nick of time to get her flower and hopefully "Bah chika wah wah!" ;p

Great chapter. Awesome.

river919 November 10 2009, 20:22:11 UTC

lol Yeah, wasn't it though? Sara was arrogant and quite self-centered immediately assuming the flowers were for her, from a drooling teenager nonetheless. LMAO Glad you liked the chapter. :-) Thanks for reading and commenting. :-)

mauvebeads November 9 2009, 18:19:39 UTC

I had the pleasure of reading the whole story from the start. Love it!!

river919 November 10 2009, 20:26:08 UTC

lol That's the best way to read: stumbling upon a story that has several chapters posted so that you can sit down and read more than snippets. :-) Thank you reading & commenting. Glad you enjoyed it. :-)

mauvebeads November 11 2009, 18:14:46 UTC

I have been following your story from the beginning!! I just reread the whole thing and loved it. Keep up the good work.

river919 November 11 2009, 23:48:47 UTC

Oops. *blush* And I was envying you for having the chance to read a longer story in one sitting. Happy to hear you took the time to actually reread it. :-)