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Jan 07, 2006 23:00

Well, my "project fic" is still going; I add to it whenever I'm at the regular computer (since I don't have it on my laptop). I've at least come up with something good for the "transition point" (you know, when Takeshi and Shingo go from being, well, themselves XD, to hot-and-horny). It's actually based off of something from Calvin and Hobbes, but I'll either tweak it so it's less distinguishable, or credit Bill Watterson. I'll have to see how it goes.

I am having one little problem with it, though. Originally, Takeshi was going to be the seme. Then I decided it would be funny if Shingo turned the tables on his just as they start "getting busy." Then, recently, I didn't think it would be plausible that Takeshi would initiate things, so, forgetting about my little plan, I switched who said what. Suddenly, Shingo started coming on strong, and Takeshi became kinda shy. Now I'm stuck because I can't figure out what to do. There are some lines that I made up earlier that I don't want to lose by making this change.

So, the question is, where do I take things from here? Ultimately, I want Shingo to be seme in this fic, but I'm just not quite sure how to carry things out. This is mainly supposed to be a humorous fic; jokes abound everywhere. So, I'd prefer not to make things too dramatic. *sigh*

Oh well. I'll sleep on it. Or maybe just read some gay stories. lol
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