Comments | risti: Honest Thieves Part 1/4

risti

Honest Thieves Part 1/4

Jul 01, 2008 19:09

Title: Honest Thieves
Rating: PG-13, Heavy on the innuendo
Wordcount: ~16 000, completed.
Disclaimer: I own nothing, MGM owns everything, including SG-1 and all characters. Also, Lois McMaster Bujold and BAEN Books own the real Miles Naismith. I only seek to offer an homage by borrowing a few names.
Summary: Daniel is sent on a solo mission as a ( Read more... )

sg-1, d/v, ficcin ship, lmb, daniel, fic, vala

Comments 6

anonymous July 2 2008, 17:43:14 UTC

This was a great rendering of Vala. And her walking into the gateroom and flirting with Daniel makes sense, at least in fanfic world.

risti July 2 2008, 22:25:19 UTC

Thank You! Yes, adding a little more explanation to that intro scene was definitely in the back of my mind while writing this!

ringgoldgate July 2 2008, 23:30:17 UTC

I just love your use of humor in the story. Wonderful twist at the end with Vala's Knee putting Daniel down. *giggles*
Susan

risti July 2 2008, 23:39:24 UTC

Thank you!

It wouldn't be D/V - especially at this point in their relationship - without humour!

whytejigsaw July 3 2008, 10:05:52 UTC

This is really fun - looking forward to reading the rest.

aeryn_b July 31 2008, 18:57:30 UTC

Oh Wow! I love how you hook us at the beginning and then go backward a day to Jack and Daniel. They are great. Early Vala is great! Daniel's attraction to her is great!! You don't always see that in the show, because I imagine Daniel is at least pretty good and hiding his feelings, even if he isn't too good at being a spy. Anyhoo, I'm absolutely loving this.

Moving on,
~Erin