An expiriment with a really rhymey song.

[risenpheonix]

Stumbling
in the dark
through the sand at the edge of the bay

Fumbling
just to walk
and I know that I wont find my way

Starving for light
ready to fight
for the parts of you I think are real
elation and pain
are mixing again
like the blood and the soil of a battlefield

Could you pull me?
Pull me back to sanity?
Pull my like the moon-does-the tide?

Can you help me?
Give me all your energy
without you I won't survive the night.

Tears
fall like stones
forsaken at the edge of the precipice

Leave
me alone
or I know I won't get through the rest of this

Theres no end in sight
and I don't have the right
to drag you with me down under
But to get through the night
I cling to you tight
so that you cannot tear us asunder

Could you push me?
Push me with your charity?
Push me up 'til my heart beats again?

Can you save me?
Give me your humanity.
Will you give me strength to unbend?

Stinky? Yay or Nay?