Am I turning you on...

[rise_nd_fall]

Havent written in a while. Whipped this one up today though- - comments appreciated.

stumble down the stairs
breaking every bone
have the doctors rushing you away
or leave u there all alone.
If you were me and I were you
what would you suggest I do?
well- i'm at the crest
looking down on your helpless body
(you always looked good in red)
I can hear you breatheing
Faint but steady- wheezed and resilient
(Well all this would take is...)
All it would take is-
my hands around your neck
stareing straight into those eyes
and those lips are my excuse
not to take life from you tonight.

Cheers.