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RisabetTitle: 062. God, Hankyung/Kangin
Word count: 529, fic count 8/100
Rating: PG (I think)
Disclaimer: I am in no way related to these people, only the story is mine
Summary: Answers don’t come easy for anyone. Afternoon in the train station.
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What happened at the train station? Anyone got hurt?
Anyways.. this one's a lil profound it's numbing my brain. maybe it's the late nights that are starting to work their "magic"
But still I like the way it's written.. Will be back to uh.. Fully uderstnad it later. xDDD
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First!!
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As for what happened: in the fic, well, probably the same thing that happened in real life: nothing. No one got hurt, no one knows what it was about and the next day there will be no mention of the incident in the newspapers. It was all rather odd, but such is life I suppose.
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A great read, like always. ='O I like the end, how it kind of continued to be about the gunshots, but in a really non-blatant way that makes it seem like it's almost completely unrelated... *squints* I'm totally bs-ing and failing. DX
I think Kangin's reaction here was really well done. Very realistic.
AND OF COURSE, MY FAVOURITE LINES:
cells in circulation
Dunno. Great metaphor.
This must one of those moments...
Pretty much everything after this I like <333 Especially the italicized paragraph. I can't claim I completely understand it...but it puts me in an interesting mood...XD
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I come home from work, and go "Asdfghjaf - tired - I'm gonna do NOTHING today - grumble, grumble, grumble." and be generally a very unpleasant person for a while. Then I have a mug of tea, maybe a piece of fruit and lo! Energy! Happiness! Yay! Yes, I really am that simple ^^; Although I have no idea what'll happen next week - I'm quitting work this Thursday (time to start preparing for uni entrance exams)!
And you're totally NOT bs-ing nor failing, you are made of WIN and you absolutely spoil me with your wonderful comments <3
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IT'S THE LEAST I CAN DO, SINCE YOU SPOIL US ALL WITH YOUR WONDERFUL FICS. DX
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He doesn’t get to chance to truly comprehend what’s happening when first two, then one more loud bangs cut through the air. A woman screams right next to him but the sound is muffled, as if though coming from afar. Confused, Kangin turns to meet Hankyung’s eyes, two endlessly deep orbs wide and bright with terror. At the back of his mind Kangin knows the expression is not mirrored in his own gaze. It’s absurd, and he wants to laugh because this is the first time he would have a good reason to use a word as pretentious and superficial as ‘surreal’. This must one of those moments during which seconds stretch into eternities that last less than a single breath, he knows because he has heard of them, read of them in bad poetry he’d never admit having laid his eyes upon. So he breathes, breathes in, breathes out…
I love that paragraph particularly...
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