Star Wars fic intro
Yes, I'm obsessed with Star Wars. :P
Anywho, I'm trying my hand at a Star Wars fic, and would like to post the intro here for all your humble opinions.
The fic is AU, and will basically be my version of how Episode III could have happened if the Clone Wars had never happened. Don't expect a happy ending, though. ^^; I'll find a way to darken it up, despite the peacefull times, just not in the same way George Lucas did.
WARNING: Short (as it's just the intro) and UN-BETA-READ.
So, I leave you with the intro to the fic:
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away...
STAR
WARS
AU Episode III: In a Time of Peace
Peace. It is one thing that everyone in the galaxy wants, yet it is one of the hardest things to acheive. Despite this, peace currently reigned in the galaxy, though it was fragile.
Seperatist leaders were caught trying to build an army of drouds from a hidden base on Genosis. Jedi Knight Obi-wan Kenobi found and was able to shut down the factory when only a handfull of droids had been built, ruining the seperatists' and the Sith's plans to start a galactic war.
After some arrests and negotiations, seperatist leaders had no choise but to abandon their quest. War was just barely avoided.
Through all this, the notorious Count Dooku, also reveiled to be the Sith Lord Darth Tyranus, escaped capture and has been in hiding ever since then. The Jedi order have prioritised his capture and arrest, and have been searching relentlessly for him throughout the galaxy...
Anywho, I'm trying my hand at a Star Wars fic, and would like to post the intro here for all your humble opinions.
The fic is AU, and will basically be my version of how Episode III could have happened if the Clone Wars had never happened. Don't expect a happy ending, though. ^^; I'll find a way to darken it up, despite the peacefull times, just not in the same way George Lucas did.
WARNING: Short (as it's just the intro) and UN-BETA-READ.
So, I leave you with the intro to the fic:
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away...
STAR
WARS
AU Episode III: In a Time of Peace
Peace. It is one thing that everyone in the galaxy wants, yet it is one of the hardest things to acheive. Despite this, peace currently reigned in the galaxy, though it was fragile.
Seperatist leaders were caught trying to build an army of drouds from a hidden base on Genosis. Jedi Knight Obi-wan Kenobi found and was able to shut down the factory when only a handfull of droids had been built, ruining the seperatists' and the Sith's plans to start a galactic war.
After some arrests and negotiations, seperatist leaders had no choise but to abandon their quest. War was just barely avoided.
Through all this, the notorious Count Dooku, also reveiled to be the Sith Lord Darth Tyranus, escaped capture and has been in hiding ever since then. The Jedi order have prioritised his capture and arrest, and have been searching relentlessly for him throughout the galaxy...