Heartbreaker

[rinji_chan1]

Title: Heartbreaker
Characters: All Arashi members
Pairings: Mostly Gen; slight Sakuraiba and some one-sided pairings
Rating: PG-13+
Warnings: Swearing. And alcohol, if that counts.
Summary: It was supposed to be the best party ever. However, with a late-comer going to the party to likely burst the bubble, what's the worst thing that could happen?

Comments

[yuuki_nyanmaru]

I really liked this one! I liked how you described Ohno's thoughts when he was observing the people around him. Every needed detail was there and I love when that happens haha. Also, let me tell you that I love to see someone "exploding" in fics so I loved Sho's part. I'm sorry for him because he wasn't able to get over Aiba, but gladly he managed to do it at last. But...gosh...That "Aiba felt a sting in his chest as he heard that."...So did Aiba still feel something for Sho???????? Rinji what are you trying to tell me???? *sakuraiba shipper's heart dies*

Ohno for sure did a mistake when he pushed away both Nino and Jun without trying to understand fully the situation. But gladly Jun didn't give up on their friendship. Also, I was afraid that after the argument Ohno and Nino wouldn't talk anymore but fortunately he cleared everything up with him. Now everything can come back to normal~ But you know, now I wonder...Why Jun left his boyfriend so suddenly? I want to catch up too with things like Ohno lool.

Thanks for writing this! It was really nice to read ^^ Also, sorry for the long annoying comment...

P.S: basically you had inspiration right in front of your eyes at that party, that's some kind of...luck I guess XD

[rinji_chan1]

Thank you so much! * o * As much as I love that drunk part too, in reality it's not so good at all haha. Well, about Aiba, hmm... maybe? XP Though if I were in his and Sho's situation, I think it would be hard to still be friends with your ex (but, hey, that's my opinion). But yeah, even Aiba-chan is hurt T u T

I wish I had friend like Jun, honestly XD And yes, I too want to know more about Jun and his ex LOL We all need catching up to do ;)

And of course, I wouldn't say it's "luck". More of coincidence I think XD I never really saw the fight, "Sho" and "Aiba" (yeah, I'm going to call them that haha) fought outside. I only found out when another friend went to me about it. And literally I was frustrated because I told "Sho" to just ignore "Aiba" and his new gf. And "Sho" told me allllll the details the next day. So, yeah, I wish it doesn't happen ever again. T u T

Anyway thanks again for reading! I really appreciate long comments actually XD