The Unholy Alliance - Rindee - WIP 2/4 - R

Aug 11, 2006 23:28


Title:  The Unholy Alliance - WIP 2/4 ( Read more... )

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taken_with_you February 13 2008, 22:58:51 UTC
As always, you set the scenes so beautifully:

Logan and Veronica enter the nondescript industrial-type building through an over-sized delivery door. Although they’re greeted by the sound of clanging metal and the whirring of hydraulic tools, no one’s visible. As they walk past a tangle of discarded car parts and threadbare tires, they realize men are working underneath various cars and trucks hoisted on lifts. Someone wolf-whistles at Veronica, but she squares her shoulders and ignores the stares.

I've been in precious few auto shops, but they're all the same, and this intro just put me *there*.

She directs Logan to Mrs. Navarro’s residence, located in an obviously poor neighborhood on the wrong side of Neptune, where houses sit precariously close to one and other, the streets are unkept, and the scant yards are littered with abandoned, broken bicycles and second-hand toys. She tells him not to park in front of the house. Instead, they park a couple of blocks away and approach through a neighbor’s overgrown backyard. Here ( ... )

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