What a nice and smutty end to the end of this fic. I've loved it from the vmlyricfic challenge and still do.
The flashback to 8th grade was adorable and so sweet. One quick nitpick, isn't Casey the same age as Lilly? I always thought he was supposed to be a senior during S1.
That final scene was just really enjoyable to read, and pretty hot.
Thank you so much, Roz. I so enjoyed writing this that I'm really sorry it had to end. *sigh* Glad you enjoyed the smut - I really thought Logan and Veronica deserved a day at home, in bed. The flashback literally wrote itself, but I'd delighted you thought it was cute. As for Casey, I was never clear on his age, so let's just say he graduated high school in three years instead of four. Thanks for the fb - your comments always make me happy.
*grinning* Delighted to hear you loved the flashback - I think it was honestly my favorite part too. The ending - I just thought they earned it after all they went through. Thank you for commenting - I'm so tickled you enjoyed it so much.
*huge sigh* Thank you - you know how I struggled with this, the mystery, the relationships, deleting almost all the "Ronnies" - not that it was a chore, but it was certainly a learning experience. Thank you for always being supportive, and honest.
Hey girlie! I'm so excited that you finished this, and by the deadline, too! Wheeeee
I loved: Logan had been listening intently, but his eyes were trained on Veronica’s hands, hidden in her lap as they fidgeted and spun her ring round and round. because it's so uncomfortable for Veronica to be uncomfortable about the new weight, and for Logan to notice it. Excellent detail. :D
I also loved this exchange: “Little did we know,” Logan paused, remembering all that had happened, all the things that had gone on between them, from then until now. “That one day, I’d be standing at alter, hopes dashed, jilted by my brilliant, inscrutable fiancée.” He stared at her meaningfully.
“Logan!” she protested, stung by his words. “I said, yes, didn’t I?”
because it really shows the depth of Logan's hurt.
Of course the smut was smokin' and I really loved the exchange at the end. *sighs longingly*
Score! You actually enjoyed the smut. *buffs fingernails* Thank you, honey, for everything. As you know, the exchange at the end was all you - wonderful thing that you are. I'd like to think I would have come up with something equally good, but we both know whose words they are.... The ring - I just thought it was so perfectly Veronica and Logan - she's both bothered and comforted by it, and he's focused on her. I can't believe how sad I am to have finished it all.
Hello mah darlin'. -smiling- I'm so happy you posted, even if I am sad to see the story end. Is it silly to want to see the i-do's? Nah!
There are so many things I love about this fic. The visual I get of Backup gamboling in the waves. It's always the little things for me... the little extra details and your writing is always stuffed with 'em. Right down to the Costarican coffee.
You know that I thought the sex was pure magic, because not only did I insist on it... I insisted on MORE of it! -laughing- I love her playfully teasing him while he watches her from the tub, and I love, love, adore her toweling him off, because she looses track of the eroticism of it - the effect it's going to have on him - because she's so in love with him.
I can't help but love the Taming scene the most, though. The cigar band... it's just one of those brilliant strokes across the page. It's so hot when he kisses her for her very first time. It's funny, isn't it? How the most innocent things - like a kiss - can be even more sexy than twenty
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Hiya, doll. I'm happy to see you too, and thank you for putting up w/ me during the final stages of this behemoth, although I am truly sad to see it end. Weird, huh? As for the "I dos" - you'll have to convince me there's a reason to write them - or maybe I should say persuade me. Ha!
Costarican coffee is to die for - I'm telling you. Try it sometime, if you haven't ever. I'm so happy you mentioned their love for each other, and that it was evident in the last few scenes - even if I had to paid you to say it. *smirk* I was trying to make it clear how much she loves him and how far she's come in their relationship since those dark days of high school. And I'm so happy you and Sask made me keep all the sex. LOL.
You and I are probably the only people who thought the Taming kiss was hot - I thought the flashback was the best part of the fic. We are an amazing team. *grins madly, blushes* Thanks again for all the loveliness that is you.
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The flashback to 8th grade was adorable and so sweet. One quick nitpick, isn't Casey the same age as Lilly? I always thought he was supposed to be a senior during S1.
That final scene was just really enjoyable to read, and pretty hot.
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I loved: Logan had been listening intently, but his eyes were trained on Veronica’s hands, hidden in her lap as they fidgeted and spun her ring round and round. because it's so uncomfortable for Veronica to be uncomfortable about the new weight, and for Logan to notice it. Excellent detail. :D
I also loved this exchange: “Little did we know,” Logan paused, remembering all that had happened, all the things that had gone on between them, from then until now. “That one day, I’d be standing at alter, hopes dashed, jilted by my brilliant, inscrutable fiancée.” He stared at her meaningfully.
“Logan!” she protested, stung by his words. “I said, yes, didn’t I?”
because it really shows the depth of Logan's hurt.
Of course the smut was smokin' and I really loved the exchange at the end. *sighs longingly*
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There are so many things I love about this fic. The visual I get of Backup gamboling in the waves. It's always the little things for me... the little extra details and your writing is always stuffed with 'em. Right down to the Costarican coffee.
You know that I thought the sex was pure magic, because not only did I insist on it... I insisted on MORE of it! -laughing- I love her playfully teasing him while he watches her from the tub, and I love, love, adore her toweling him off, because she looses track of the eroticism of it - the effect it's going to have on him - because she's so in love with him.
I can't help but love the Taming scene the most, though. The cigar band... it's just one of those brilliant strokes across the page. It's so hot when he kisses her for her very first time. It's funny, isn't it? How the most innocent things - like a kiss - can be even more sexy than twenty ( ... )
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Costarican coffee is to die for - I'm telling you. Try it sometime, if you haven't ever. I'm so happy you mentioned their love for each other, and that it was evident in the last few scenes - even if I had to paid you to say it. *smirk* I was trying to make it clear how much she loves him and how far she's come in their relationship since those dark days of high school. And I'm so happy you and Sask made me keep all the sex. LOL.
You and I are probably the only people who thought the Taming kiss was hot - I thought the flashback was the best part of the fic. We are an amazing team. *grins madly, blushes* Thanks again for all the loveliness that is you.
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