My first completed song....^^

[rikyu]

Fighting for every glance
Small wins, devastating losses
He waits for his own acceptance
Knowing not the causes
Ah, the deafening silence...

Poor boy
Who cares?
This war you’re waging
This heart that tears

Sitting full of fear
Waiting here by the phone
She contemplates the thought
Of being all alone

Poor girl
Who cares?
This war you’re waging
This heart that tears

Staying for what?
This feeling sinks down
Staying for who?
They turn you to a clown

Poor boy
Who cares?
This war you’re waging
This heart that tears

Is this what you want?

Poor girl
Who cares?
This war you’re waging
This heart that tears

Ah, the deafening silence...

What do you guys think? Good, bad? Comment on it please! ^^ Thanks.