Fic: Married At First Sight - Epilogue

[rikke_leonhart]

Title: Married At First Sight - Epilogue
Pairing: Ohno Satoshi/Ninomiya Kazunari
Rating: R to light NC-17
Word count: 3,800/~39,000
Warnings: Language
Summary: AU: Experiment: Get married to a stranger and live together for four weeks before deciding whether or not to stay married or get a divorce. Nino and Ohno do things in reverse order.
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Comments

[rikke_leonhart]

Did you know that I had the absolute shittiest time trying to get into Ohno's headspace after spending three years in Nino's in this fic? It was kind of terrible, but luckily, I had a cheerleader on fb haha!

(No lie, I really love that shining bright song, but it's mostly because Sia wrote it and I adore Sia xD)

I was worried that their voices would be too similar, so I had a few days of intense rewriting, because I'd accidentally given Ohno a very similar thought process and while it's very normal that couples do a sort of photosynthesis, I was very disastisfied with the ensuing result. So. Rewriting *\o/*

I'm one of those people who think about every aspect of what the characters do in between scenes and after the fic ends, so I totally know what you mean. For example, Nino wants Ohno to use the gift card for a new couch but Ohno ends up not using it because he forgets that he has it. Nino will never let him live it down :P They both have fun with the yoga class though. Ehem.

Gaaah, I'm so happy you keep finding things to think about in this fic, this is exactly why I love writing, oh god <3

Thank you, thank you, thank you <3<3<3

[oviparous]

hey there new friend, you! :D

three years. i don't know whether to laugh or cry for you. haha. you did good though! i really, really enjoyed it.

ohno's headspace must quite a universe.

(i need to google that shining bright Sia song because i was pretty sure i was making an Arashi reference hahahaha. i love music so much i'm hoping to career-switch to be a musician (no kidding) but my playlist is an Arashi wasteland. i think i just use them as a BGM for when i'm driving. like elevator music hahaha. not that their music isn't good. it's good sometimes? :D)

dude. rewriting. you are brave, so brave. i've only thought about rewriting but i'm like 'that's gonna take months' and i just.

i'm so impressed that you worked so long and so hard on this fic and ACTUALLY PUBLISHED IT. YOU DIDN'T GIVE UP. you Aiba, you.

ahahahaha Ohno forgetting the gift card - IRL i presume there'd be conversations like "This is the gift card situation all over again omg" because esoteric. niiiiice.

yoga. was it a real class, or was it a video game? lol. i kid. kinda.

you are most welcome! i think a lot about stuff. i'm saying this as a warning, i think. ;)

PS. we are officially friends on LJ, on my end ;)))

[rikke_leonhart]

I did my fair share of crying and hair tearing over this fic, it's only fair I share it with the class after that haha!

Ohno is so difficult for me to write it's not even funny. He's like, very simple in his thinking, and I don't mean that in a simpleton kind of way, but he's just very straight forward and honest and me, with all my convoluted writing, is not suited for that omg I was so frustrated xD

(OMG is there an Arashi song with those lyrics??? I feel like a bad fan D: I feel like I would have been yelling that at the top of my lungs at one point, though, so you're probably right xD)

Rewriting is my achilles heel most of the time, because I just don't want to. Once I start fiddling with paragraphs it basically just demands I do something about the rest and I want to cry a little bit. I figured with this that I'd already been sitting on it for years so what was a couple more years?? /WEEPS

Yep, the gift card situation happens exactly like that xD Dude, imagine how smug Nino is when he announces that his husband is bendy...?

I'm really looking forward to it 8D I'll get back to stalking you properly when I get back from Edinburgh next weekend, because my head is filled with packing these days xD

(PS YAY FRIENDS *\o/* Beware of immense Star Trek feels.)

[oviparous]

hey gurrrrrl. I JUST RE-READ THIS ENTIRE FIC AGAIN BECAUSE I CAN! (pumps hips)

lol sorry, weird mental image. anyway.

all the feels~~~~ i love the feels!

also i've just realised i haven't replied to this. i apologise. the Arashi song with "shining bright" in the lyrics is Hope in the Darkness on the Digitalian album, by the way!

i hope if you ever write Oh-chan again it'd be easier for you! i'm so excited to read your next work ♥