Ch. 23

[riansage]

Sorry for the delay, this was a tough chapter to get out. I think I replied to everyone that reviewed ch. 22. I'm leaving for vacation for a week in the morning (Riviera Maya without the kids! Woohoo!), so ch. 24 will probably take a while as well. That's probably good news for Lossefalme who has been getting swamped with all these little

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[lossefalme]

Hee hee... I really liked chapter 23. :) I thought the subtle character thoughts and actions you threw in really added to the story. About your short fic "The Fountain"... I actually haven't read it. I was a little confused when I got your email because I hadn't been to your ff.net profile since your last chapter. ;) So sorry for confusing you, if I did. I started to read it, but then I stopped because I thought it might spoil me for what will happen later in "Will of the Force". Tee hee. I know that sounds silly, but when I realized it was after the Battle of the Star Forge I thought I should wait to read it. Even though I REALLY want to read it, because just from the first paragraph or two it sounds really emotional/melancholy/angsty. :) All good things. Heh heh.

Well, I hope you have fun on your trip! Maybe I'll have something else for you to beta when you get back! I should at least have 21 edited and posted, and I'm hoping to finish my one-shot companion piece today or tomorrow as well. Although... I'm having trouble deciding if the one-shot should just be put in as a flashback in Betrayed. It could definitely just be put in like that... but then it's all in first person, and I'm too lazy to change the whole thing to third. So I guess it will just be seperate after all. ;)

Anyway... HAVE FUN!!! And talk to you when you return!!!

Spoilers for Will of the Force?

[riansage]

I don't think "The Fountain" has spoilers. If anything, it adds a little background to her relationship and feelings on Malak. It's definitely a background piece, but not necessarily a future piece. Does that make sense?