Taipei travels fic :D

Oct 13, 2008 23:27

Aaah, so many prompts, I was only able to complete three, but here they are. No guarantees on the quality, and they kinda...went longer than I thought they would. Anyhow, I'm requesting, no, begging for any concrit you have. Spelling issues, coherent sentence and pronoun issues, characterisation issues (ajfoara especially those, I'm worried about ( Read more... )

my fic, arashi

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Re: <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 flange5 October 18 2008, 14:23:44 UTC
Speaking of rolling around in, I couldn't help but reread when I responded back &hearts

Sho laughed ruefully and looked down at Ohno's tugging, who'd apparently received some telepathic message from Nino. "Come on, Sho-kun, let's go get some ramen," Ohno said peaceably. "We'll bring some back for you three," he said, pulling Sho along by the arm down the hallway.

Aiba heard Sho mutter, "Three? Ohno-kun, what about--" before they disappeared around a corner.

Poor lonely befuddled!Sho^^" all left out and clueless>_<

Or thwarting, but that would mean glares of bloody death from all sides (or pouting from Aiba for being denied, which might be worse).

True. I think Aiba's pout might be more devastating, but that may just be the selfishness talking^^"
Hmm . . . Nino's headspace, though, does seem daunting . . . Maybe safer to stick with Jun or Aiba . . . ^^" *imagines the terrible vengeance of Nino*

I remember hearing about the tiger presents and thinking 'cute, but not really Sho's style.' But awesome ^^

I . . . may have just gotten the image of Aiba presenting Sho with a black velvet tiger painting in my head. Oh Lord. *shudders*

*waves*

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