Comments | rhymer23: A Tale of Two Wizards part 3

rhymer23

A Tale of Two Wizards part 3

May 20, 2006 17:14

Part three: In which both Chrestomanci and Howl are boring.

( A tale of two wizards, part three )

Comments 8

baruchan May 20 2006, 18:36:03 UTC

Ah, now we know why these two men are unfortunately stuck with each other, but for how long, I wonder? :D

Aiee! Two terribly vain men competing in a sighing contest!! O_o I was half-hoping that Chrestomanci would win, mainly because he was stuck with his job for longer than Howl did with his...

And I'm pretty sure that Bethan would grow up as daddy's little girl.XD I love the thought of domesticated!Howl...it's so sweet!

I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. :)

rhymer23 May 21 2006, 11:00:33 UTC

Howl had to win the sighing contest, I think. He had to win something. Chrestomanci is totally taking control of the situation, while poor Howl is tagging along, nursing a hangover, and always one step behind. He needs the consolation prize of winning a sighing contest.

Next chapter later today, I hope... It needs some work on it first.

kathianta May 20 2006, 22:53:06 UTC

*Sighs* I do love Chrestomanci and Howl. Lovely story, by the way!

rhymer23 May 21 2006, 11:02:54 UTC

Thanks! I love them both, too. I can't work out which one I love more. Though I think both are men who are far more loveable in a novel than they would be to live with in real life. I think they would both drive any woman to despair, and make them want to shake them, slap them and scream at them in fury.

kathianta May 21 2006, 11:24:06 UTC

Oh, definitely. But that's what makes them so much fun!

melata_fic May 24 2006, 09:05:51 UTC

Hee. Though, not even with settling down can they ever be boring. *amused*

quillsworth May 24 2006, 11:10:17 UTC

Ack, so well-written! Love the flow and remarkably IC dialogue. Very well intergrated narrative; interesting plot. :)

smellen_of_troy May 28 2006, 15:59:21 UTC

This is such a great idea! I love how it's shaping up! The authors are the cuprits, very cool!

I love Howl declaring that he is not suitable for children.

Now I want to write a childrens story about a retired villain who raises bunnies, just to prove you wrong: I think it could make a very interesting story XD. Are those villains from an actual book?

I can't wait to read the other chapters! Damn life, stop being so busy *grumble, grumble*...