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Helpless

Dec 07, 2008 16:21

Title: Helpless
Author: star54kar
Prompt: cold
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 100
Warnings: Allusion to canon torture
Author's Notes: I saw the prompt and a bunny hit me hard and fast. I hope you enjoy it.

( Helpless )

author: star54kar, cold, genre: angst, rating: pg13

Comments 10

hpuckle December 7 2008, 21:30:54 UTC

Ouch, ouch. That is like the part of the book that hurts me the most! And this is heartbreakingly perfect.

xxx

star54kar December 7 2008, 21:38:16 UTC

I'm flattered that you think so.

Your prompt hit me rather fast and furious. I can't remember ever writing a 100 worder so fast!

thesteppyone December 7 2008, 21:32:31 UTC

*meeps*

Wonderful though!

star54kar December 7 2008, 21:37:02 UTC

Thanks Steppy!

I'm glad you liked it:)

scribhneoir1 December 7 2008, 21:48:38 UTC

wonderful, great use of the prompt, well done!

star54kar December 7 2008, 21:54:07 UTC

Thanks:)

I"m glad you enjoyed it!

greenschist December 7 2008, 23:27:47 UTC

Wonderful, just wonderful. I sobbed for Ron when I read this part in DH, and I think you really captured how helpless he felt.

star54kar December 8 2008, 00:46:23 UTC

Thank you very much:)

mugglemama December 8 2008, 02:44:15 UTC

So powerful! Very well written, heartbreakingly realistic.

star54kar December 8 2008, 03:52:32 UTC

Thank you! I'm so happy you enjoyed it:)