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Helpless
Dec 07, 2008 16:21
Title: Helpless
Author:
star54kar
Prompt: cold
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 100
Warnings: Allusion to canon torture
Author's Notes: I saw the prompt and a bunny hit me hard and fast. I hope you enjoy it.
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Helpless
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author: star54kar
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cold
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genre: angst
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rating: pg13
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hpuckle
December 7 2008, 21:30:54 UTC
Ouch, ouch. That is like the part of the book that hurts me the most! And this is heartbreakingly perfect.
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star54kar
December 7 2008, 21:38:16 UTC
I'm flattered that you think so.
Your prompt hit me rather fast and furious. I can't remember ever writing a 100 worder so fast!
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thesteppyone
December 7 2008, 21:32:31 UTC
*meeps*
Wonderful though!
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star54kar
December 7 2008, 21:37:02 UTC
Thanks Steppy!
I'm glad you liked it:)
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scribhneoir1
December 7 2008, 21:48:38 UTC
wonderful, great use of the prompt, well done!
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star54kar
December 7 2008, 21:54:07 UTC
Thanks:)
I"m glad you enjoyed it!
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greenschist
December 7 2008, 23:27:47 UTC
Wonderful, just wonderful. I sobbed for Ron when I read this part in DH, and I think you really captured how helpless he felt.
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star54kar
December 8 2008, 00:46:23 UTC
Thank you very much:)
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mugglemama
December 8 2008, 02:44:15 UTC
So powerful! Very well written, heartbreakingly realistic.
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star54kar
December 8 2008, 03:52:32 UTC
Thank you! I'm so happy you enjoyed it:)
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Your prompt hit me rather fast and furious. I can't remember ever writing a 100 worder so fast!
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Wonderful though!
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I'm glad you liked it:)
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I"m glad you enjoyed it!
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