This morning was a two cup day.

[rhienelleth]

After yesterday's epiphany, I thought I'd post an example as I work on fixing it.  Also, unexpected things about one's characters often come out on the page when you aren't looking for them.  Apparently, Drug (a minor character) is devoutly religious.  And Mercy (my MC) isn't.

Since I myself am of a religious bent, this is an odd realization to have

Comments

[dragonsinger]

The rewrite does seem more accessible. Well done.:)

I was hoping you were still working on this. I hadn't heard an update recently so I was worried.:)