Drabble - Iron Man

Jun 07, 2008 21:49

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aka_paloma June 8 2008, 06:17:53 UTC
Nnggguhh! You wrote Iron Man fic. You wrote Tony/Pepper Iron Man fic. I don't know whether I love you more for writing this or gabby_silang for stumping you.

Once again, I find that the tension built up in your stories always makes me forget to breathe. You're really good at building the anticipation for whatever might be next.

“In case you were wondering what’s under my exterior. Absolutely nothing.”

And I sort of pathetically giggled loudly when I read that.

*sigh* That was great. I wish you'd write more Tony/Pepper but I totally understand that you've got your novel (and sequels) to work on. Thanks for this little bit you wrote. I really loved it.

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rhienelleth June 8 2008, 06:40:48 UTC
That Gabby! She knew what she was about with that line and then this request. ;) This pairing was only a matter of time for me, anyway. They've been whispering to me since I saw the movie. *sigh*

This helped, but there will have to more, once the novel is done.

Once again, I find that the tension built up in your stories always makes me forget to breathe. You're really good at building the anticipation for whatever might be next.

Thank you! ~ you say the very best things. :o) The tension is the most interesting part to me. Well, okay, so the actual smut is a pretty good payoff for all that tension, too. But I love recreating in words what I see (or imagine) one the screen.

Seriously, once le novel is finished, some nice, entertaining fic will be just the ticket...and I must ask, where did you get that fabulous icon?

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aka_paloma June 8 2008, 07:04:12 UTC
The icon is by backporchpoet. There are a few icons floating around based on that picture, as well as a few others that are at different angles of that deleted scene. If they don't include it as a deleted scene on the DVD, I won't be responsible for my actions.

And I don't know if you can tell because the icon is so small but she's got her hand around his neck and her fingers are in his hair and it's just so guh! Honestly, never in a thousand years did I ever think Gwyneth Paltrow and Robert Downey Jr would have this amazing and sizzling chemistry, but here I am drooling and thinking that her hand at the nape of his neck and in his hair is the sexiest thing ever.

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rhienelleth June 8 2008, 07:07:43 UTC

Are you telling me - seriously - that there is a deleted kiss?!

I haven't been this excited about a DVD since I heard about the deleted Faramir/Eowyn kiss in RotK - which never made it to the DVD extras, to my crushing disappointment.

Holy crap. This news has made my entire night. There apparently exist caps of this deleted scene, at the very least, if people are iconing it. *must have*

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kistha June 8 2008, 06:31:43 UTC
Hee-hee. Even though I haven't seen the movie, but I get the idea.

Favorite line: Not helping I can so hear it in my head!

Loves

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rhienelleth June 8 2008, 06:44:12 UTC
The icon! Heh. :)

Thanks, I hope this was a good escape for a few minutes. ;)

Yeah, and this wasn't too spoilery - the whole boss/assistant tension and angst thing is fairly obvious from reviews or casual talk about the f-list.

And I still can't wait for you to see this movie. :-)

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artic_fox June 8 2008, 09:36:36 UTC
Loved this very much. Your writing is beautiful! I hope you treat us to more fic in the future :)

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rhienelleth June 8 2008, 16:03:01 UTC
Thank you so much! I hope so, too. I enjoyed writing Pepper and Tony. :)

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gabby_silang June 8 2008, 13:22:32 UTC
!!!!!

I love your definition of a drabble. And your PEPPER and her extravagant secrets and jesus, you took away his underpants and I LOVE IT and I have to go to WORK on a SUNDAY MORNING but there is nothing better I could have woken up to. Oh, hell. I really, really, really missed your fic.

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rhienelleth June 8 2008, 16:22:18 UTC
LOL - I told you I suck at drabbles! I think it was mspooh who once asked me "You know a drabble's supposed to be around 100 words, right?"

Anyway.

I'm so pleased you liked it! You are my gold standard for this couple. :) And the lack of underpants was totally Tony's idea.

I'm sorry you're stuck going to work on a Sunday. :(

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celli June 8 2008, 14:56:37 UTC
This is absolutely fantastic. nngh.

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rhienelleth June 8 2008, 16:24:01 UTC
Aw, thanks. :o)

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