Fic: Times Gone By

Jun 18, 2011 12:24

Long time no post... sickness and RL issues kind of piled up like no tomorrow. Finally had inspiration to finish this piece, though, and enough juice to hopefull continue the arc.

A huge thank you to my kind beta,solan_t  who yet again, not only fixed my foreign grammar but helped with making sure that what was in my head actually got written down.

He's still not quite sure about the whole thing when the evening of the performance arrives, and he finds himself in Hawke's mansion, with Varric wearing something with a stiff collar, way too much embroidery and tasseled shoulders, that he swears is formal Dwarven noble attire. )

fic, dragon age 2

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girleevviill June 18 2011, 19:09:31 UTC
This is incredible. I love how you have all of the characters pegged so perfectly and the layers of meaning in the exchanges between them.. Made me choke up. I do hope you write more. :D

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rhia474 June 18 2011, 21:04:54 UTC
Mm, thank you. They talk ALL THE TIME in my head... do I need to speak to my doctor, you think? :)

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loquaciousquark June 18 2011, 20:43:07 UTC
This is just...oh wow. This is beautiful. I love the lyrics you chose for inspiration, and the echoes of them in the last few paragraphs are gorgeous. Your Fenris in particular is great, and his conversation with Varric! I was torn between laughing and being amazed at how spot-on both their voices are there. I'm seriously in love with this fic.

(The only thing is--I wonder if it would be possible to add some indentations or some blank lines between paragraphs? As it is, it's a little difficult to read. D:)

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loquaciousquark June 18 2011, 20:58:31 UTC
Also, uh, ninja!friending you. Every time I come here I'm reminded how much I love your fic, so might as well read it right from the source!

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rhia474 June 18 2011, 21:03:49 UTC
LOL, not a problem at all--thank you!!

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rhia474 June 18 2011, 21:03:24 UTC
Thank you!! I'm always afraid whether the way they sound in my head translates into writing, but it seems it worked.
As to the paragraphs, yep...your wish is my command. It is done! It looked OK in preview and then I lost them, so thanks for the warning!

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spiderine June 18 2011, 21:42:40 UTC
OMG this is awesome and I need more! I need to know what happens next!

Thank you so much for writing and posting and sharing!

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