"The Torch," Expanded Edition

Jan 31, 2007 00:32

I've completed a revised draft of "The Torch," with the idea of posting it on Phoenix Song. 
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rosathome January 31 2007, 12:52:44 UTC
I love that you do all the maths!! Tiny Brit pick - we'd say 2.03pm (GMT) rather than 'Greenwich'.

But still a great story.

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rhetoretician January 31 2007, 14:54:02 UTC
Thanks! I knew that GMT stood for Greenwich Mean Time, so I assumed that an unusually precise person like Hermione would think "Greenwich." (The way a precise American would say "Eastern Standard" instead of "EST.) But I'll change it.

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rosathome January 31 2007, 15:05:48 UTC
Well, if she were being really pretentious, she might say 'Greenwich Mean Time', but probably she'd go with GMT. Which, since we have only one time zone in the UK, is already more precise than most would bother to be.

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rhetoretician January 31 2007, 15:08:07 UTC
Point taken. But it's important that she be that precise here, because -- well, maybe I'll try to let you figure it out. Here's a hint: I almost used the phrase "Universal Time, "which is what astronomers call GMT.

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tdu000 January 31 2007, 18:35:53 UTC
If it's June, wouldn't that be BST (British Summer Time) anyway?

This is such a brilliant idea for a story. I liked the firtst version but I think the additions make it even smoother.

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rhetoretician January 31 2007, 18:55:13 UTC
Actually, Bel, for my purposes I needed to specify GMT, even if England would really have been observing BST at that moment. That's another hint.

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tdu000 January 31 2007, 20:12:43 UTC
I'd wondered if it was significant at the time, as you seemed to be making such a point of mentioning it. I would expect the magical world to ignore British summer time but as Hermione was living with her parents an the last witch alive, I would also expect her to use BST again.

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rhetoretician January 31 2007, 20:16:19 UTC
Last clue: She thought of it as GMT (or rather, Universal Time) because she needed to know it at the moment she performed the anchor charm. Further sayeth this deponent not.

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rosathome January 31 2007, 20:53:53 UTC
Okay, I'm bad at solving this kind of riddle but I really want to know. Was there an eclipse or something?

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rhetoretician January 31 2007, 22:24:42 UTC
Okay, okay; I can't bear to see Ros suffer.

1403 hours, 21 June 1998 (Universal Time), was the exact moment of the Summer Solstice. The underlying theory is that the Reflective Curse operates only when the poles are aligned with the Sun, which happens only at the solstices.

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ndanukiwi February 1 2007, 00:06:15 UTC
God you're a nerd. ;)

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ndanukiwi February 1 2007, 00:11:28 UTC
(And I mean that in the most respectful and adoring way, of course.)

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rhetoretician February 1 2007, 02:34:51 UTC
You oughtta know. And I mean that in the kindest and most respectful way. :P

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rosathome February 1 2007, 03:21:57 UTC
Wow. You see, that's the difference between you and me as writers. I make that sort of stuff up. You do the research and the maths and get it right. I don't think I ever heard the expression Universal Time when I was doing my physics - is it a new concept? Or just one for only very specialised astronomers?

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rhetoretician February 1 2007, 03:36:03 UTC
Well, I do make up spells. But I got so upset at JKR for doing no basic, easy research at all for her Astronomy OWLs in OoTP that I promised myself the astronomy in my fics would be impeccable.

Universal Time wouldn't be of much use to astrophysicists or cosmologists -- but all observational astronomers, as well as astronomers who are plotting the orbits of bodies around the sun, need it. You need a standard reference point (referred to, in orbital astronomy, as an "epoch") in order to locate things. By general agreement, any time reading listed in an astronomical observation or prediction, unless otherwise noted, is assumed to be in UT. If JKR really knew anything about astronomy, this is something Hermione et. al. would have learned in their five years of astronomy. (What I wouldn't give to have had five years of astronomy!) Open any issue of Sky & Telescope and you'll see endless references to UT.

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