A Comedy of Errors

Aug 01, 2009 11:36

Or: Nishikido Ryo's Life as a Korean Drama. Featuring an annoying cast of practical jokers, Eito with an unhealthy interest in other people's love lives, and compulsive snugglers.

Disclaimer: This is pure fiction.
Pairing: Taguchi Junnosuke / Nishikido Ryo
Rating: NC-17 for explicit sex
Betaed by: solo____. Thank you again!
Story notes: Originally ( Read more... )

jpop, fanfic, junno

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girlearthless August 1 2009, 15:05:02 UTC
Here to leave proper comment! I love love love how you start the story out with Ryo basically homeless and needing a room to stay in xD And of all rooms, Junno's ;D I love all the punning, and Eito's meddling and playful badgering, and Ryo, who rationalizes so much but gets it right somewhere in the middle, and Junno who is just fabulous and awesome in general.

"'Kay," Taguchi mumbles, and then bedclothes rustle and the mattress shifts and Taguchi wraps himself around Ryo like an octopus.
Oh this image was so very very sweet *__*

Ryo graciously ignores the cuddling. The man's letting Ryo share his bed, after all. It'd be rude to complain.
I really do agree with Ryo's reasoning XD

When he looks up, every single member of Kanjani8 is staring at him with the exact same expression of blank astonishment on their faces.

Oh.

Fuck.
Oh, my, god this was hilarious. The sense of impending doom, oh poor poor Ryo!

"Good figure," Subaru goes on. "Long legs. Probably very enthusiastic. Energetic, too. Good to go all night! What do you guys think?"
I laughed out loud at this XD Of course the first thing Subaru would think about is endurance ;D

"Huh," says Taguchi..."You guys really are cool."
You know, I was not surprised that was Junno's reaction XD Somehow he seems like the type of person to take everything in stride, and this situation is no exception ;D

"You want to come inside?" says Junno, at exactly the same moment Ryo blurts out "I should get going."

Oh well. Next time.
This was adorable! I love how you give them all these opportunities and somehow awkwardness gets in the way ♥

"You think I'm some kind of bastard who will kick his heart to the curb and never even notice. I get it, believe me."

Ohkura just holds the stare for another moment, and doesn't apologize.
I loved the whole exchange here, and whre Ohkura is all thoughtful and quiet throughout the entire ordeal because he's friends with Junno *_* I have a soft spot for those two and it's adorable how protective Ohkura can be!

Ryo doesn't think it sounds like a particularly tempting prospect, himself, but Junno lights up like a stage boasting twice the usual number of floodlights.
Oh, Junno's smile can light up the world *___* This was so sweet.

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rheasilvia August 2 2009, 13:27:15 UTC
Here to leave proper comment!

Wow, when you set out to do something properly, you don't fool around, do you? Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, and for telling me what bits in particular you enjoyed!

with Ryo basically homeless and needing a room to stay in

Pi has a lot to answer for, that's for sure! *g*

I love all the punning, and Eito's meddling and playful badgering

The Eito tease and meddle and badger because they love. And because it's good for Ryo to be kept on his toes.

Ryo, who rationalizes so much but gets it right somewhere in the middle

He can be a little... set in his ways, shall we say? But he knows a good thing when he sees it. Eventually. ;-)

Junno who is just fabulous and awesome in general.

:-))

I really do agree with Ryo's reasoning

*g* Well, of course! Why else would Ryo endure being cuddled like that? He's just being a good guest.

You know, I was not surprised that was Junno's reaction

Good! :-) And yes, absolutely - to me, Junno also seems like someone who is quite happy to roll with things that would give most other people pause.

I have a soft spot for those two and it's adorable how protective Ohkura can be!

Me too! Ohkura is awesome. And here, it's not that he doesn't like Ryo - he does; he just knows him, and knows Junno, and, well. *g*

I am very glad you liked the story so much! Thank you again for this wonderful note. :-)

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