Mutants begin. At some point. /lame Batman reference

Jan 12, 2013 23:53

Is anyone around who'd be willing to give me an opinion on the beginning of a very short (around 1000 words) and slightly cracky XMFC story...?

I can't decide whether or not to cut the first three paragraphs. I could really use a second opinion!

On the title too, actually. But then that's normal for me. Title-impaired should have been my middle name.

xmfc, writing

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