Proposal [KHR, 8059]

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Title: Proposal
Fandom: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
Pairing: 8059 [YamaGoku]
Rating: PG-13 for Gokudera's mouth and hints at sexuality
Summary: Yamamoto liked Gokudera. Gokudera liked poetry. What better way to pop an important question than a poem?
Notes: Tricks has written 8059. I know, the world is ending. Not necessarily because I don't like it - it

Comments

[nerdraeg]

First of all: aohifoahfoahfoiaheffoeahgihaeigohaeghuiaehguihaeuighaeiu TRICKS WROTE 8059? AND F-FOR ME? OH. MY. ouaefhba NO WORDS. Much squeeing, but no computable WORDS really come to mind beyond a huge and loud and flailing THANK YOU. &hearts

You captured them so well in such a short amount of time, with so few lines, that sort of witty back-and-forth they have, with mean words being fond, and being brushed off, and Yamamoto's ability to be both stupid and clever, and sappy too and aufiafgbiagfbiagbfuiabgefiuae.

WIN GET. And a lot of it.

Oh, Tricks. Marry me. &hearts =3

Favourite line -- "If you wanted to move in together, you could have just asked. You didn't have to write me a fucking epithalamion or whatever..."Other bits I really enjoyed

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OF COURSE I WROTE 8059 FOR YOU. I KNOW YOU LOVE IT, DARLING, AND SINCE I LOVE YOU IT WORKS OUT GREAT. ♥ I-I just realized that's kind of like Yamamoto knows Gokudera likes poetry so he writes him a poem OTLOTLOTL

I-I'm so happy that you thought I captured them well! *characterization h0r orz* The dialogue has always been my favorite part about these two, they're so fun to write interacting. xD

I WILL GLADLY MARRY YOU, MAI LOVE. ♥♥♥ A-a-a-and fanart? PERMISSION GRANTED LIKE BURNING. askdjflsjdfs you're too good to me sob.

[nerdraeg]

STILL, THAT WAS SO NICE OF YOU. &hearts TRICKS, 8059, and LITERATURE DWEEBAGE. ALL MY FAVOURITE THINGS. XDD It is, it is.

Characterization is totally delicious here. &hearts And really one of the most important bits. And yes-- when they speak, I smile. It just happens. And you made me smile, kiddo~

ADUAHBIDA ILU &hearts Okay, then I will DO IT LIKE BURNING. And no, really, it's all you. ): <3

[afterburn]

HFDKHKJSGKJSDBJGKNHGFXHGIUHXGJ BCJG JKGHKJGHSKJHFDAKJGFHKSGHKSA!!!!!!!

t-thank you for becoming a Yama/Goku fan. thank you thank you! I ADORE the way you write in general but this was simply too cute for words. you have these two down so well. oh so very well.

why do you write them so well? why do you write so well? oh please please write more of these two, kyoudai~! ♥o♥

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dksjfksdjfjsf I-I-I'm happy you liked it, anikiiiii~ ♥ I'll probably be writing more in the future? I promised sharingank a reward and all. Um. Yes. ANYWAY. Love dear~ ♥

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HAPPY ANIKI IS HAPPY :'D♥

[kiku]

a;lsdklas I LOVED THAT LAST PART~♥

"Since I started finding it really sexy on you. Can you fault me for wanting to be sexy too?" I think this is my favorite line. 8D Oh, Yamamoto♥

This was really cute~ *A*

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I'm so happy that you liked it! ♥ Haha, their dialogue's always really fun to write whether or not they're paired up.

[kidouche]

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Remind me to flail at you over MSN. Seriously. Because I don't have a coherent thought in my head at the moment, and it's mostly because of Yamamoto reading PRIDE AND PREJUDICE which is one of my favorite books ever and. Just. The thought of Yamamoto writing a poem to ask Gokudera to move in together. Oh my lord. BRB, peeling myself off the floor. :D

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Talked on MSN. Flailage commenced. I LOVE YOU DARLING *peels off the floor*

♥♥♥

[gomimushi]

.... OMGGG OMGGG... >3<'''''

This is brilliant =O You may have rekindled my love for 8059 again. *craacks* you always capture the essences of the characters perfectly =O <3 their dialog is wonderful!! =OOO

Ahh, it's so sweet :'D And so Yama, to write a poem to Gokkun for a reason like that :'D ;;

CUTE AS HELL *W*

I'm happy to read a sweet and happy 8059 fic *nods* :'D <333

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Haha, well, I'm happy to have rekindled said love! I'm so glad you liked it, I was nervous about how well I did with them~ ♥