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Denial, Chapter 6: Sweeter Than Honey

May 10, 2009 19:38

Title: Denial, Chapter 6: Sweeter Than Honey
Author: darkentwistedRating: NC-17 ( Read more... )

rating: nc17, fic, denial - fic, pairing: djaq/will, 2x09, character: will, pairing: allan/djaq, character: allan, roundrobin2009, character: djaq, denier: darkentwisted

Comments 6

haecvir May 11 2009, 03:51:50 UTC

I like how you worked in the subtle affection between Djaq and Allan that showed up time to time, but also had her end up with Will, like in canon. The sex was good too, it was short but well written and didn't throw me out of the fic like het usually does. Djaq is smart, a camp in the woods is not the place for a baby :P

Poor Allan! Like Much (not anymore!), everybody just shoves him down all the time, even though he tries.

Thanks for keeping this going :)

robinfanatic May 12 2009, 23:15:49 UTC

darkentwisted did a great job on this chapter! And I'm not just saying that 'cos we're co-writing an awful lot of this saga! He is such a wonderfully creative person. His plot bunnies spawn about 20 times faster than mine! (not jealous. nope.)

Thanks for reading & commenting!

CLAIMING CHAPTER 7 robinfanatic May 12 2009, 23:13:22 UTC

I'm going to pick up the Much/Carter storyline - we last left them in a barn in France if you recall. And there was lavender...

shaman_whore May 17 2009, 22:59:09 UTC

(did you post this one on tmr? don't think I saw it. Sorry it's taken me ages to read, anyway)
What a fantastic chapter! Everything between Will and Djaq was beautiful, some funny little moments and the sex was very good, and POOR ALLAN! Mrow :(
very big well done :)

darkentwisted May 23 2009, 05:07:08 UTC

Thanks for reading!

We decided not to post on TMR if the particular chapter didn't include Much. Maybe we ought to rethink that.

As a usally almost exclusive slash writer, writing Will/Djaq was refreshingly mad fun.

*Glomps your icon*

Tis so pweetee and much looks so vulnerable I just wanna tickle him.

thestorymaker June 4 2009, 22:33:36 UTC

The constant threat of rape and death at the hands of her captors caused her to deny the woman that she was in Palestine. But here in the forest, with the man she found herself becoming more drawn to every day, she was SafiaI loved this description of Djaq, it just sums up the woman she is, despite the facade she lives under. I'm so pleased that you were able to set their relationship into a spin earlier than TPTB did in the actual show. You wrote the characters so well in the scenes, their gentleness and strength they seem to bring out of each other. (I really really miss Djaq and Will now ( ... )