Denial , Chapter 49: A Question of Doubt

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Summary of previous chapters...

Title: Denial, Ch. 49: A Question of Doubt
Author: wastingyourgum (with much appreciated assistance from robinfanatic )
Characters/Pairings: Guy/Marian, Sheriff Vaizey, Allan/Guy
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angst, Hint of Slash
Words: 1543
Disclaimer: BBC & TA own

Comments

[queerlyobscure]

I always get so excited when I see a new chapter of this. Justifiably so.

And Gods, poor Allan. And poor Guy for that matter. But it's good that they're sticking together.

Also -

Her delicate hands hold up the ugly iron chain as if it's a bracelet of the finest silver and he realises with a shock just how strong those seemingly fragile feminine fingers actually are.

Brilliant - point made perfectly.

[wastingyourgum]

Thank you!

Guy's going to look after Allan - he is his boy after all...

I did think it was nice to try and get in Guy's head over how his view of Marian would have to change once he had a better idea what she was capable of.

[ladykate63]

Bravo!

I love the "trust" theme and the way it's handled. It's great to see Allan back to his old tricks (literally!), and Guy's intervention. And the Guy/Marian scene is wonderful. I love, love, LOVE the bit about Marian's hands; it's really interesting to see Guy slowly coming to terms with her identity as the Nightwatchman. The Guy/Vaizey scene is excellent too, especially the last line.

I really, really cannot wait for more. PLEAAAAAASE don't kill Marian this time! (Or Guy or Allan...)

[wastingyourgum]

Thank you!

And you'll just have to wait and see who makes it and who doesn't...

...but it's called 'Denial' for a reason ;)