Comments | rh_denile: Denial, Chapter 16; Racing Against the Sun

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Denial, Chapter 16; Racing Against the Sun

Jun 13, 2009 23:10

Title: Denial, Chapter 16; Racing Against the Sun
Author: darkentwisted
Characters/Pairings: Robin/Much, Stranger
Rating: PG
Genre: Angst, Hint of slash.
Words: 1,689
Disclaimer: BBC & TA own; we just want to play in their universe
Notes: This continues the 'Round-Robin' fic 'Denial' and is set during "Walkabout"
Betaed by the incredible robinfanatic and wastingyourgumSummary: Robin ( Read more... )

denial - fic, roundrobin2009, denier: darkentwisted

Comments 6

wastingyourgum June 14 2009, 06:52:58 UTC

Oops - you've left in a comment about spelling "pyjamas"..

darkentwisted June 14 2009, 08:53:42 UTC

yeah about that *glares at Char*

robinfanatic June 14 2009, 13:13:23 UTC

LOL! how many times can we review these things and miss something like that... you will recall I spotted the stray " mark!!

robinfanatic June 15 2009, 01:03:43 UTC

The original scene in 2x10 was both heartbreaking and wonderful at the same time. Much was so happy to be on a mission with Robin -- alone -- again; and you could just see how overwhelmed with emotion he was when Robin told him that Marian said 'yes'.

I've read this story numerous times and love the way you turned Much into a figment of Robin's imagination. It works so perfectly. Makes Robin feel a bit guilty, too, which he should!

Love the way you ended the fic. Haha - a leaf, eh? hm... out on the middle of the ocean... hey, this is Denial after all! *hugs*

darkentwisted June 18 2009, 03:57:48 UTC

One more entry from me then I turn the pen to another Denial writer. Claiming chapter 17. ;-)

shaman_whore June 18 2009, 22:43:02 UTC

Love that Robin keeps imagining Much, and that he disappeared when it was achknowledged how much he was missed.
The Sherewood Avenger XD I can't imagine Much with a sidekick!
Hahaha I love that the bloke has an imaginary companion of his own!
'He looked remorsefully at the spot where his friend vanished. "I liked worrying about you."' .....*small noise of sadness*
'But he wondered as he ran, without Much or Marian by his side, who would save his soul.' ♥
awwwww and Much dreamed it and everything! Awesome touch there.. and a leaf! aww, truely excellent, well done xxx