Denial, chapter 15: Don't Let the Sun Go Down on Me

[robinfanatic]

Title: Denial, ch. 15: Don't Let the Sun Go Down on Me
Author: robinfanatic 
Characters/Pairings: Marian, Guy, Allan
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Slash (implied)
Words: 408
Disclaimer: BBC & TA own; I'm just playing in their universe
Notes: This continues the 'Round-Robin' fic 'Denial'.
Summary: 3 very short vignettes that take place during 2x10 shortly after Guy has

Comments

[darkentwisted]

Claiming Chapter 16! Robin has to break it to Much about Marian but Much is half a world away.

[wastingyourgum]

Nice - short and sweet and great use of the title too! You managed to link the thoughts while keeping them separate and in character.

[robinfanatic]

Thanks! This was a spur of the moment addition and it's a bit rough but I think the sentiment is there. I'm surprised our brains missed considering these moments earlier when we might have gotten a longer piece out of it. There was quite a bit of time we could have worked with between what darkentwisted wrote in ch. 11 and the opening scenes of Walkabout up to the upcoming ch. 16 with Robin and Much! Ah well...

[shaman_whore]

excellent chapter! like wastingyourgum said, great use of the title, and i love the ending. well done! x

[omteddy2006]

I'll third the great use of title notion.

Also, I love the fact that this was done as three vignettes instead of a longer piece as you lamented it should be. By writing it this way, it fits better with the flow of the Walkabout storyline - frenzied, disparate thoughts that occur when time is running out and one is forced to focus on the moments/relationships that are truly important.

[robinfanatic]

By writing it this way, it fits better with the flow of the Walkabout storyline - frenzied, disparate thoughts...

Well of course...that was exactly my intention!
*wishes I'd thought of 'splainin' it that way*

Thanks for your comments!