Comments | revreg: I learn that I know nothing.

revreg

I learn that I know nothing.

Dec 30, 2003 18:55

This is some lame poem I wrote a long time ago, it doesn’t have the same meaning for everyone, or so it seems, but isn’t that sort of the point of many poems anyway? Read it, criticize it ( Read more... )

Comments 8

stillxstanding December 31 2003, 06:14:04 UTC

wow. i like it.

13_fireflies December 31 2003, 08:23:54 UTC

it makes me sad... that i dont know what half those words mean.

it is not lame.
u r a good poem writer.
you dont know me but thats okay!!!

anonymous December 31 2003, 10:00:12 UTC

CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM:

Next time you make an attempt at writing, use words that fit your point well, not words chosen by the number of syllables or the fact that the general public doesn't know their definition.

Thanks revreg December 31 2003, 11:27:36 UTC

Who is this anyway?

13_fireflies January 1 2004, 08:19:55 UTC

hmm.. i am not the general public, im sure plenty of people know what they mean, i do now that i have looked them up.

walkingawaywyou December 31 2003, 20:43:06 UTC

like it..just like i like all the other one's i've hear..u talented..

_kiss_and_tell_ December 31 2003, 20:56:35 UTC

wow...that was really good