rps: lie in the sound: fernando torres/sergio ramos: (1/1)

[fiveto_midnight]

title; lie in the sound
author; fiveto_midnight
rating; pg
fandom; football rps
warnings; not much, to be honest
pairing(s); fernando torres/sergio ramos, xabi alonso
word count; 1,372
disclaimer; nope. don't own a thing here.
notes; err, really, this was supposed to come out as a happy celebration thing. I guess listening to kent from ’05 doesn’t really do much for

Comments

[ttentten]

i shouldn't be reading this at work, but i loved this!

[fiveto_midnight]

haha well, at least it was a milder rating on this one! but thank you, really glad you liked it! ♥

[nadilee]

Now I know what was missing in my life. FOOTBALL RPS.
you, bb, are awesome :3

[fiveto_midnight]

YES. embrace it!
sfdjk aww, you're awesome bb :D

[sunlight_dust]

nghhh this was so so so lovely. The story seemed so steady and the way you wrote their relationship was effortless. <3

Because it’s always been about Sergio staying and Fernando leaving. About Sergio saying nothing because it’s already too much, and Fernando saying too little because he doesn’t want to have to carry too little on his shoulders.

really liked this. ♥

[fiveto_midnight]

sfdkjlkas thank you so much bb, i'm so glad you liked it ♥♥

[bossbadger]

Maybe it's just that everything is making me cry lately, but this made me cry.

Beautiful. Thank you.

[fiveto_midnight]

aww bb don't cry, but thank you ♥

[kissmecait17]

Fabulous. I loved this: "Comes out like you’re leaving soon, again, and he doesn’t want to think that." A nice translation of Sergio. And the end bit about how it has always been about Sergio staying and Fernando leaving is beautiful. Nice job.

[fiveto_midnight]

thank you so much, very glad you liked it! :)