Nov 17, 2008 19:11
I just wanted to post this one here because it's funny:
Your story is making me feel something I've never felt before while reading afanfic, which is very interesting to me! Is like... is hard to explain, islike there is a dark cloud in top with the feeling of doom. UPDATE SOON! You're a great writer by the way.
*lol* I'm thinking he's not a native speaker, but it totally makes me giggle. Because parts of it sound kinda dirty.