two weird reviews
I currently have a How I Met Your Mother fanfic, and I got two reviews from the same person that made me go WTF.
Awmydang!i love this story!its the only good long-term story i've read on here about the whole gang:),although i do realize that its Barbin/Milly centered.the third chapter was alittle boring sentance wise.you need to find a synonymn for agree and try to say 'change all of our lives' in different words b/c its getting alittle repetitive.& in Chap 2 there were some grammatical errors.well bye.pls continue its great so far!& i luved that singsong part of Barney its so like him.and one other thing,i think that you should of maybe set the story later in the future just b/c its not all that realistic that Ted's found a wife and has a kid in like 4 yrs(idk may be it is but in Chaps 1 he had Morgan w/him in 2009 and THATS not too realistic.)so maybe it can be labeled as an AU.im just saying. -I don't even know how to respond to how. And how is it unrealistic to get married and have a baby in four kids? It's 2012 in this fic. The characters met in 2009, married at an unknown time, and have a newborn son.
yeah,as i said earlier i cant wait until you post more chapters but just dont get too cheesey with the pregnancy and the baby when it comes.thats probaly the biggest flaw i've seen on stories dealing w/a pregnancy(especially in the HIMYM site).but im kinda being hypocritcal seeing how i've never wrote a pregnancy/baby story b4.but,im just saying..:) -I'm not going to get too cheesy (or cheesey, according to the reviewer) on a pregnancy fic in which Robin is a surrogate for her best friend and has to give the baby up. Besides, Robin doesn't even want any kids. She's just doing this as a favor to Lily. Thus why the fic is called Friendly Favor.
I have a new chapter up, and I'm waiting to see if I get another review like this.