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[kainasilverbane]

Title: Shards
Author/Penname: Kainasilverbane
Rating: PG-13
Chapters: Chapter 3 (WIP) (EDITED!)
Pairings: (optional) Fujitaka/Kaho
Summary:(Main summary on first chapter post) Tomoyo's had her way and Kaho's seeing green. The demon in Eriol crashes the Christmas party and cameos and foreshadowing galore!
Warning, Notes: (optional) Bloody, very

Comments

[sheila_chan]

I finished it! :)

I noticed the cameos! Most are from TRC! There's Fai, Kuro and Yuuko! I must say, Fai and Kuro are very in character.^^

And the song's from TRC too!

This is a nice development to your story. I especially like the part where Fujitaka was angry in a Fujitaka-sort-of-way.

Fujitaka pulled over and stopped the car. He sat there for a moment, his grip on the wheel tightening until his knuckles turned white and the material began to make cracking noises. Kaho looked over at him and found white hot rage covering his face. For a moment she found herself pressing up against the door to try and get herself as far away from him. He had yet to learn that his emotions could harness his powers to actually radiate outward like the sun radiates light and heat.It's Fujitaka-ish

[kainasilverbane]

Oh thank you! You put a grin on my face the whole time I read your comment! It was a really esteem boost!

Did you catch the other two cameos? I wouldn't be surprised if you didn't, it was a quick flash of them, and it's not an anime that people have seem much of. I'm not going to point them out just yet to see if others pick up on them, but I'll list them all next chapter.

You liked the Fujitaka gets really angry part? Yay! I worked on that bit a lot to make it feel like it would happen. Oooh, and there's a Sonomi and Fujitaka confrontation in chapter 5 which thouroghly enjoyed writing.

Grrr, I thought I'd gotten all of my boo boos. Oh well, no such luck, I will find them and fix them!!!

Dress=OMG Eat my head. I swear I almost chucked it at one point, but I'm so glad I stuck with it. I just wish it didn't look like BABY FOOD! XD But yesh it is purty. Teehee

It's 6:30am, I'm a dork. XP

Eriol kitty! *plays with his tail*

[claire_chan]

Wow, that certainly was long! *hoards cookies*

Um, I caught one typo!

“The only way I know of showing how much I care for both Sakura and Fujitaka is to try and keep them as safe as possible, and of course you too Tomoyo,” Kaho added as she angled her head to look up at the young woman, who smiled down at her, “But right now all I seem to do is make things harder for them.”

“That’s not your fault,” Tomoyo said, “tilt your heard back please.”

Head. XD

I think from now on I'll probably refer to Mizuki-sensei as "Kaho the Christmas Carrot." XD I saw the two other cameos but didn't recognise where they were from. And.. why did you marry Fai to Yuuko? XD Just out of curiosity. I thought that was an unusual thought.

I can't wait to see the rest of it, keep going! ^_^

[kainasilverbane]

No! I read over that passage twice! MONKIES!! <~ (Uses that in place of cuss word XD)

Christmas Carrot? XD *giggles* It works.

Arc and Shiki are from an anime called Lunar Legend Tsukihime. Arc's full name is actually Arcuad, but that confuses people with prounounciation, so I used her knickname. ^_~ It's about vampires and...stuff...and...yeah...XD

Oh, and Fai and Yuuko? Cause I could! MWAHAHAHAHAH!