Alpha and Omega [2/2]

Oct 01, 2006 14:05

Title: Omega [2/2]
Author: revengeandpiety
Pairing: Ray/Frank
Rating: R
POV: Third; Frank centered
Summary: Frank and Ray deal with tragedy.
Disclaimer: I make love to don’t own the MCR boys.
Author Note : Completely for Sika - mrshcaulfield because she can always make me smile, no matter what. You rock, kmao. Thanks to my beta icantfixyou.

Alpha

Omega )

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silindro October 1 2006, 19:08:08 UTC
OMFG!!!
I... It's... You... I worship you, even if I am still clinging to my chair.
I kinda knew all alone that they wouldn't make it, but I still had some sort of hope - up until Heather that is. It was just down hill from then.

Ray leans down, cupping Frankie’s face in his hands and kisses him desperately. Slowly, their tongues curl around the other and it’s soft but powerful. When Ray pulls away, Frank’s eyes are shining and his breath is shallow - That better not have been a good-bye kiss

I bit my finger while reading that just so I couldn't cry out. I managed to just whimper, which I'm fairly proud of.
Dammit, this was just so amazing! I feel like re-reading it, but I have to go shower and then go to bed.

Thank you for writing something different. I needed that!

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revengeandpiety October 1 2006, 19:31:29 UTC
*huge smile*

Aw, you make me really happy!! And you're comment is really nice! Ahh, yeah that kiss kinda killed me a little to write that.

Haha we never really know whether or not Frank makes it, but basically his spirit died when they took Ray away.

It was sad to write, but I'm glad you enjoyed it. Even though I'm a total fluff addict, I thought some tragedy would be a good change.

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silindro October 1 2006, 19:45:46 UTC
I figured changes of Frank making it after loosing Ray are like... None existent!

I can't believe you killed Ray. It keeps dawning on me and making me sad. Ray's so cute and cuddly. He's not suppose to die. He's suppose to be there and hold Frank's hand and... and... and be Ray-ish.
*Sigh*

I'm as much as an angst addict as I am a fluff addict. Actually, I just think I'm a MCR slash addict.

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revengeandpiety October 1 2006, 19:47:50 UTC
I can't believe I killed Ray either, I didn't want to, you gotta believe me. aha

I had too.

It was based on this dream I had, but in the dream Ray lived. But, well, I had to axe our favorite cutie guitarist. *Pets Ray*

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silindro October 1 2006, 19:49:43 UTC
I believe you.
I never want to kill people off either, but it just seems like all the characters in my stories are suicidal or destined to die of some sort of disease.

You do know that I am MADLY in love with that icon of yours, right!?

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revengeandpiety October 1 2006, 19:52:49 UTC
Aww =[[ your poor characters! lol.

Mine usually end up pretty happy. But I haven't written all that much, so eh. =]]

Ah, I knowww. That icon killed me when I saw it. I was like *gasp* LOOK AT THAT HOTTIE. He's got that 'come hither' look and his torso is all long and thin and amazing. d;lfjksdfh *swoons*

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silindro October 1 2006, 19:55:54 UTC
His body looks amazing! But when doesn't it!? I mean, out of all of the guys, Ray clearly has the best body.
Mmmmmm...

Mind if I steal it (the icon, not Ray's body... Though, that might be fun!)?

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revengeandpiety October 1 2006, 19:57:21 UTC
Ah, his body DOES always look amazing. Yeah, he does have the best body. Those thighs and those arms and that bulge. XD

Be my guest, spread the Ray icon love.

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silindro October 1 2006, 20:01:04 UTC
God yes, the bulge! It's just spectacular.
He's just generally lick-able as hell.

Yaaay, thanks!

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revengeandpiety October 1 2006, 20:02:16 UTC
*Bites lip* I WANT TO LICK RAY!!!!!

And touch his hair. and watch him cut my grass. :]

You're welcome!

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silindro October 1 2006, 20:04:49 UTC
*Whimpers*
I want to lick him too.

Oooo... To touch his hair! If I ever meet him, I am seriously going to ask if I can touch his hair.

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revengeandpiety October 1 2006, 20:06:02 UTC
Me too! I don't care how crazy I sound. I'm gonna be like, Ray please pleassseee let me touch your orgasmic fro? pleasssee.

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silindro October 1 2006, 20:07:33 UTC
Hahahahaha, orgasmic fro!
That's a good one! I'm sure he would even let you. I mean, I've read about other people asking to touch it, and he allows says yes. And, besides, if you call it orgasmic, how can he say no!?

I suggest moaning lightly while touching it. Just to top it off.

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revengeandpiety October 1 2006, 20:08:53 UTC
Yeah, Ive heard that too. Ray's such a gentleman. He would say yes, I just know it.

AND KMAO @ THE MOANING. that is beautiful. =]

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silindro October 1 2006, 20:11:27 UTC
He sure is. And he seems like he's almost always in a good mood. Just a little beam of sunshine:)

I would seriously do it! Close my eyes and do my best orgasm face and gently fumbling with his hair.
Mmmmmm!

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silindro October 1 2006, 20:12:17 UTC
*while gently fumbling with his hair...

Seems I'm too tired to read what I'm posting.

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