The Other Son: Chapter Six

[revenant_scribe]

Title: The Other Son
Author: revenant_scribe

Chapter Six: NEST
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Rating: R
Warnings: wincest, semi-spoilers for 1.18 'Something Wicked'.
A/N: AU. This is difficult to summarize fully without also spoiling fully. All I can say is that there is no new Winchester being added into the mix. This is definitely not one of those fics.
Summary: Sam knows

Comments

[dodificus]

I can't believe how quickly you're getting these chapters out, it's great! I'm glad Sam went back to say goodbye to Dean at the beginning, let him know what was going on. This series is like 'Lost' in the sense that no matter how many questions get answered there are a million more things that pop up and I Just. Can't. Wait.

[revenant_scribe]

Dear lord, I hope it isn't quite like 'Lost' -- that show is incredibly frustrating. I can't believe how fast this fic is going either, it's not entirely a good thing as I signed-up for the genfic challenge and that's due by the 20th of the month, and so far I've been writing this and this alone!! *is sheepish* Glad you're enjoying!

[angstpuppy]

This is just such an amazing story. I love the way you are building it up. And yet I can't wait to figure out why John doesn't know his oldest boy is alive. Did John sacrifice Dean to a demon? Or was it done to Dean and John thought he was better off dead? Arggghhh..... It's got something to do with Sam's vision and the child's cry and man's agonized call, I know that.
You are keeping me on the edge of my seat. I like that.

[revenant_scribe]

I'm so glad you're enjoying!! To give you a bit of a hint (because the answer isn't coming for a while...) It might help to think of the vision as split, maybe? Like, part past, part future? Just a thought ^_- All I can really say is, settle-in for the long-haul, because I don't see the conclusion for this puppy yet ... not anywhere close!

[revenant_scribe]

LOL, don't stop, rambling is fun! Dean's 'dad' makes an appearance in the next chapter, as does our beloved town Fitchburg and all it's lovely inhabitants. I will say that, as far as John is concerned, there is a sensible reason for presuming his eldest dead, and it will cause problems for him later in the story (much later, at this rate ^_^;;; ) Lord, this thing is going to be epic...

[psychotic_scam]

*g* I love how you started it. THEN and NOW. ily *gives you a giant hug at your adorableness*

Loved the way you topped this together with Gordon coming in and the plot just thickening and that vision too. It's intriguing and I love it when stories do that. I mean, who doesn't? And you left us on a note and to wait! *flails helplessly* I'm hopelessly devoted to this and yooouuuu~ Dean's a psychic, and supposedly 'dead', unless Daddy's.. . *gasp* lying!

*wiggles impatiently, craving more* I love it~

[revenant_scribe]

^_^ I really love to hate Gordon, and I was kinda stuck on this chapter until I realized what was happening was that I needed Gordon and just ... yeah. So. Hoo-rah! for thickening plot! And for evil endings to chapters! (it's good to be bad *evil cackle*) It'll be all better in the next chapter because your wife is back (aka Sophia ^_- ) as Sam is in Fitchburg, and he gets to meet someone that people have been kinda wondering about ... and of course, there's always the glory that is Dean.

*glomps you* *runs away to write next chapter*

[lady_foxfire]

So John new about Dean's powers but did Dean's powers develope earlier than Sam's did?

[revenant_scribe]

Well, if Dean was around 10-11 in Fort Douglas, and John's bitching at him were some of the last things that he ever said to him, and also, John knew Dean was psychic, then Dean's powers would have developed much much earlier than Sam's, because I figure Sam's developed within last little while (he's about 21 now, so around 19-20 or so). Hope that helps. ^_^