Fic: Once Upon Another Time (3/5)

[reve_silencieux]

Title: Once Upon Another Time (3/5)
Author: reve_silencieux
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairing: Neal, Sara, Mozzie, Kate, June (N/S)
Spoilers: None
Warnings: Spoiler! Highlight to read if you don't like certain tropes - MPREG
Word Count: 25,700 (This chapter: 4,465)
Beta: algeiban
Summary: An AU where Sara finds Neal first. What she does after that... well, Neal is pretty

Comments

[sheenianni]

Still enjoying this, even when it's breaking my heart. I want Neal to get his life back now, not years later. I love Sara with her compassion and her developing feelings for Neal... and I really feel for Neal's determination to still live his life and not let this break him despite the incredibly shitty hand he had been dealt. This really is a beautiful story.

May I just say, I really want Mozzie to come to the rescue so they can all run to a tropical island where Neal gets his operation and they can live happily ever after, evil governments be damned...

[sherylyn]

LOL I agree with Sheeni!! I love this, and it's just so creative and so perfectly done, but I can't help but want "more" for them both, already!!

Yeah, yeah, that's why readers keep reading ;-)

[reve_silencieux]

Heee! Well, I'm not drawing it out too long. But I'm so happy someone is enjoying my madness. For me, it really is in the end a romance with Neal and Sara, and I love that part of it.

Thanks!!

[sherylyn]

Absolutely! They're just wonderful together, completely! :-)

[reve_silencieux]

Thank you! I think I shocked Sapphire when I let her read the beginning of this a year ago, and she tried to get me to be nicer to Neal - just a bit, but my muse she would not have it. Poor Neal! But yes, I do love that he got stronger, otherwise it wouldn't be the Neal we love.

Heee! Mozzie would love to take you up on that idea. And it's not to say he hasn't tried!