Fic: First Impressions

Sep 19, 2013 20:34

Title: First Impressions
Author: reve_silencieux
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Neal, Mozzie, OFC (Neal/Sara)
Spoilers: 2x5 Unfinished Business, 3x3 Deadline
Word Count: 150 x 2
Summary: Neal needs to make a good first impression, which is hard given his past, right?
Author's Notes: My first attempt at drabbles. Only I couldn't manage 100 words. So 150 will ( Read more... )

character: neal, character: mozzie, white collar, wc fic

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slytheringurrl September 20 2013, 01:55:51 UTC
Okay, I love your endings! They're fantastic. And, the story was adorable! Great job!

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reve_silencieux September 20 2013, 03:37:55 UTC
Thank you! Mozzie just inspires such ridiculousness.

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embroiderama September 20 2013, 03:30:03 UTC
HEE! Mozzie vs. Grandma is awesome, and I love Neal with his truffle gouda.

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reve_silencieux September 20 2013, 03:42:47 UTC
Isn't it just the best mental picture ever? Oh sure, he can take on Elizabeth's dad, but grandma? Hehehehe

Oh and truffle gouda is heavenly. The Dutch have the best cheese. We brought back so much of it from our trip a month ago. So I had to include it in the fic because I knew Neal would love it.

Thanks for reviewing!

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Hee! anonymous September 20 2013, 13:59:22 UTC
Too cute! I love this, and can totally picture it!

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Re: Hee! reve_silencieux September 21 2013, 02:49:23 UTC
Thank you so much!

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sahiya September 22 2013, 23:15:50 UTC
Hee! This was delightful. Oh man, Sara's grandmother would have a spine of steel.

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reve_silencieux September 23 2013, 00:24:51 UTC
Thank you! I had this idea of Neal meeting the in-laws, which unfortunately can't happen, so the next best thing? A grandparent! It was too good to pass up. Even Neal (and Mozzie) can be intimidated by the right person.

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sheenianni December 15 2015, 14:46:10 UTC
LOL, this is hysterical :D I just found it through your masterlist. What a fun story :)

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reve_silencieux December 16 2015, 04:14:24 UTC
Thanks! I wish I could write like this more often! Dang muse and her epic ideas.

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