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pendules in retorico

we'll give ourselves new names (identities erased).

May 05, 2011 19:33

we'll give ourselves new names (identities erased)
For diskarte who gave me this prompt: i want to take you far from the cynics in this town / [...] / we'll give ourselves new names (identities erased).
Fernando Torres/Fernando Llorente, Xabi Alonso, Sergio Ramos, the usual suspects. ~4000 words. AU. | It's weird hearing someone talk about someone with ( Read more... )

.football, fernando llorente, fernando torres, xabi alonso

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difusion May 6 2011, 00:22:07 UTC

I got to be honest, I was really fucking confused for a while. But then I got the hang of it and it turned out to be awesome. I really loved the theme to this. It has a great atmosphere to it and I enjoyed it.

pendules May 6 2011, 01:00:43 UTC

I'm really sorry about that, truly. D: But glad you enjoyed it anyway.

diskarte May 6 2011, 00:27:23 UTC

SSCREAMIFNSDG

diskarte May 6 2011, 00:50:32 UTC

"You made him cry. You made a six-foot-three, tattooed Viking cry."

"He wasn't an actual Viking."

"Still. Stop using your pretty face and brutal words to destroy souls."

oh my god s. your words. YOUR WORDS. i almost cried a little at some parts. you are amazing and thank you for finally posting this and i love you.

pendules May 6 2011, 00:59:39 UTC

SO HAPPY YOU LIKE IT, LOVE. :) ♥

jumping_down May 6 2011, 05:01:07 UTC

We are comment twins because I was just gonna quote that, mahaha.

bleedingdagger May 6 2011, 01:04:59 UTC

got a little confused in the beginning but THIS WAS LOVELY!

i think i need both fernandos to watch documentaries with me. i have a large couch.. we can all fit and just snuggle <3

pendules May 6 2011, 03:10:39 UTC

Thanks so much. :)

And I wouldn't object to that either, haha.

saranghaeta May 6 2011, 01:56:45 UTC

this is really tender <3

pendules May 6 2011, 03:11:52 UTC

Thank you! ♥

darkblue May 6 2011, 03:19:22 UTC

He's not like Iker who Fernando would sit in a corner with and silently judge everyone and their clothes and their accents and everything. Which he would be fine with if he didn't think Iker was judging him too.
lol. Accurate.

"You made him cry. You made a six-foot-three, tattooed Viking cry."

"He wasn't an actual Viking."

"Still. Stop using your pretty face and brutal words to destroy souls."
OMG. I'm kind of laughing but also making a D: face.

He kind of wants to shut it all out. He doesn't want to share this.
asdfgyfdtfcxsrdfgbyvgcfxdfg I don't know why, but I really really really love that.

Ugh, Shadae, I just. This was kind of ache-y at first but like. You got the progression down so well and just. IDK WHAT I'M SAYING, OKAY, I FEEL LIKE FERNANDO- spouting seemingly profound nonsense, BUT YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN, YEAH? ♥

pendules May 6 2011, 03:39:12 UTC

You got the progression down so well

OMG. That makes me happy, because that's always a big concern for me, I think. Thanks so much, Rachie. I'm really, really glad you liked this. ♥