FIC: Interlude (SanaYuki, Denouverse, R)

Dec 05, 2010 09:58

Title: Interlude
Author: Ociwen
Wordcount: 4900
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Konomi owns all, except the genderswitch verse.
Summary: Yukimura doesn't get it sometimes.
Author's Notes: Written ages ago, because I felt like it. The cleverest readers will get all the varied myu (and Denouverse) references.

This is a one-shot fic related to Dénoument, We'Read more... )

denouverse, sanayuki, tenipuri

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wednesdayschild December 12 2010, 18:12:44 UTC
a) I am so impressed that you spent your birthday coding this! Thank you so much for sharing it!

b) The first half of this was terribly painful to read. Poor Sanada, stuck in the tiny, freezing, stinky appartment, cleaning Yukimura's piss off the toilet seat, waiting alone for his boyfriend to come home on time, and being taken advantage of by Marui who couldn't be bothered to turn up to classes! As always, you are the most descriptive writer I've ever read -- nobody else comes close to the sensory evocation that you manage. I could smell the Lsyol sprayed round the appartment, and feel Yukimura's freezing toes with the too-long nails. You are a genius.

c) The second half was obviously my favourite part, because I am a hopeless romantic ;) And, oh, I love your Jackal. I love that Yukimura and Sanada are in love, but that it doesn't make it easy -- because living with someone often isn't. I totally sympathised by Sanada when Yukimura announced his new coach was going to be round in 20 mins, because I have been there and been just as furious ;) And the kitten at the end! I melted :D

Thank you so much for this, as ever :)

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reposoir December 20 2010, 21:24:38 UTC
*fails at responding*

I do rock for coding on my birthday, don't I? Either that, or it's a sign I desperately need a life.

Lysol is the most revolting smell in the world ever. It's a wonder Sanada doesn't leave Yukimura for that alone. His life is tough. He really doesn't get much out of it, besides the occasional spot of Hot Sex. Of course the ending--in this fic, and the others it really sorta leads into and out of--makes up for all that, because I'm a romantic too, and Sanada deserves like, the biggest, bestest antique vase in the world from Yukimura. And a new cableknit sweater, too. ;)

(Thank you so very much!)

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