FIC: Rewind Forward (D1) 14/63

[reposte]

Title: Rewind Forward (14/63)
Author: Ociwen
Rating: NC17 (eventual)
Disclaimer: Konomi owns all.
Summary: Niou, meet Yagyuu.
Author's Notes: Spoilers for everything.

Comments

[animegoil]

I think the part with the falling asleep on the shoulder was super cute. The image of yaning Niou ^_^, oh, but, it says 'it's not entirely deliberate, but not entirely on purpose'... i think an accidental needs to be in there instead ^_^

Oh, man, Niou, do you realize how far you've fallen for Yagyuu already? Damn. <3 Loving the changes they're all going through here, and how finally, finally, Yagyuu and Niou are beginning to connect, albeit, in odd ways and through odder means.

And yay Yukimura drama. Love it so. <3

[reposoir]

Yeah, you're probably right about the typo. It's hard to catch everything when editing a few hundred thousand words though, lol.

Yukimura has much drama. But just wait for others to join him! ;)

Thank you!

[platinum28]

The boys keep growing, but some things don't change. Like Marui's food habits. The only way they can keep going to hotel buffets is to keep up with Yukimura's training demands!

Aww, Nioh wanting to be cool is cute. But when he lets go for a moment to lean on Yagyuu 's shoulder, it's just adorable. Now I want to see it drawn, ahahaha.

I really like how the meganes keep coming back as sources of Nioh's trouble. ... Maybe with the exception of Yagyuu. It all ties in nicely. :D

Sanada needs to take Yukimura to a doctor.

[reposoir]

Meganes are Niou's big problem. His life? So hard with them ;)

But Sanada does not know anything is wrong with Yukimura--no one does, remember?

Thank you!