FIC: Dénoument, YukiSana, NC17 (1/3)

Feb 14, 2008 17:53

Title: Dénoument (1/3)
Author: Ociwen
Rating: NC17
Pairing(s): Yukimura/Sanada + others
Wordcount: 28 000
Disclaimer: This story is based on characters and situations created by Konomi Takeshi. No money is being made and no copyright or trademark infringement is intended.
Warnings: Everything you can possibly imagine. Not for the weak of heart-or ( Read more... )

sanayuki, tenipuri

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reposoir February 22 2008, 00:14:42 UTC
:D

&hearts

You could...laugh and cry all at once?

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venivincere February 15 2008, 01:29:39 UTC
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! Happy Valentine's Day to us!!! OMG I am printing this out right now and I'm taking it to bed. A fic from you is better than chocolate. *___________________* Thank you, Allison! Happy Valentine's Day! *smooch*
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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reposoir February 22 2008, 00:15:23 UTC
If you printed it out, I apologize for a) the size and b) the couple of typos I missed.

Was your Valentines good, Veni?

&hearts

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venivincere February 22 2008, 01:12:45 UTC
Oh, have no fear; I have a fic-reading template I made in Word. It's printed landscape in three columns and in 5 pt font (or sometimes 4) and I print on both sides of paper, so no waste. Then I lay in bed without my glasses on and read out of one eye. Probably not very healthy, but very comforting.

I had a brilliant Valentines Day, thanks to you. I got to read not a romance, but a love story. They're far rarer than romances, and so much more precious. You truly do amazing things in front of the keyboard, you know? ♥ I hope you had a decent Valentine's Day, too.

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edwardlippord October 9 2008, 16:43:16 UTC
Com I hope you got a chuckle or two from my Valentines Day blog; And of course Sue, I hope your Valentines Day is dazzling too.

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kittyfu February 15 2008, 02:01:20 UTC
So lovely! I love your sentences and the way you convey Sanada's thoughts. Girl!Sanada...I am a fan. ♥

Also, Marui's love sonnets... XD

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reposoir February 22 2008, 00:15:59 UTC
Thank you so much, kittyfu!

Marui writes the most beautiful sonnets, ne? He's a modern-day Shakespeare ;D

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dynastic February 15 2008, 02:01:51 UTC
Oh, oh, OH. Alison, this is... oh my god, how do I describe this? This is beautiful, crazy, out-there, funny, hot, different, and absolutely keysmash-worthy.

sdhflksdhflk;dsfsdfdshkjlfs.

I'm not one for genderswitch, but I... can't stop reading this. I really love how you get into Sanada's head. I love the pace of this. I love Niou and Jackal and Marui. And I... love Yukimura. Oh, I don't have words for this quite yet.

sdhfklhdsfs. ♥

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reposoir February 22 2008, 00:17:13 UTC
Thank you so much for giving it a chance, Missa! Your comment made me wibble- truly. &hearts

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meritjubet February 15 2008, 02:18:32 UTC
I am in a very happy place at this moment. This isn't improved by seeing that this is merely part one *_*

I love how you explored Sanada's feelings on changing and the different reactions different people to it. And how his feelings contrast with the others.

Then there's the sex. Lusty teenagers and they're hormonal and there's the mystery of why Yukimura can't get Sanada pregnant (chemo is my thought, rather obviously but it could be something else!) and I love the sex.

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reposoir February 22 2008, 00:18:26 UTC
Thank you, meritjubet! Almost everything I write has more than one section, so I'm glad you enjoyed that bit...;)

(Yukimura...just has really slow, lame swimmers. Not chemo, not his disease, his swimmers just suck ;)

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