FIC: Untitled, YanaKiri, NC17 (Happy Birthday, Yanagi Renji!)

[reposte]

Title: [Untitled thus far]
Author: Ociwen
Rating: NC17
Wordcount: 4700
Disclaimer: Konomi owns all.
Summary: The night before the Nationals final...Spoilers for EVERYTHING. Do not whine to me if you spoil yourself reading this, okay?
Author's Notes: Written for Yanagi's birthday. Happy Birthday, Renji! Unlocked because of a sign from above Kento- &

Comments

[pixxers]

I won't pretend.

I just came back to read this:

The hand on his dick is even faster now, harder, thumbing the end, smearing pre-cum everywhere. Renji shivers, his left knee buckling but Kirihara’s hold is firm and he humps the back of Renji’s leg, rocking his hips almost as though….

They were fucking.

And now I can get down to business.

[reposoir]

My lone comment! Thanks, Pix. It means a lot to me. I'll even use the dancing gouya, just for you.

[pixxers]

Hey, we've all had certain examples of genius be ignored spring fluff.

This is why I don't post to a writing journal, though. Writing journal and no community posts = easy to miss. :(

I think you should post this to one of the comms - it was good and I bet lots of people missed it.

♥

[reposoir]

Your spring fluff recipient was probably at Bible Camp, you know.

Maybe I'll post it to rikkai comm tonight. We shall see. I need to edit and ameblog and print off more Japan instuctions and apparently do schoolwork. :/

[justsonya]

Holy.... *whimpers and melts*

That was just too frickin' hot.

[reposoir]

ReallY? That's good. I was worried it would be only lukewarm.

*melts also*

Thanks so much!

[justsonya]

The imagery was excellent and the way everything flowed and connected together. *nods* It all fed into itself to give it a really solid impact.

[celen]

Oh how I love your writings. ♥ And how I've missed them!

..YanaKiri, hee. >3 It's always so lovely to read. And I adore the chemistry between them, and the way you write them so casually, realistically and ... I don't even know anymore. You are amazing, that's one thing I know for sure.

That, and the fact that they are so perfect together. Aawwww.

Sorry for the incoherency, sweetheart, I can't function anything after reading that. Now I must read it again. Thank you for sharing this lovely fic with us - and, of course, happy birthday to Renji! I'm sure he'd be thrilled to get this kind of birthday present. Ii data.

[reposoir]

Why? Where have they gone?

No ii data Celen. Renji wants Kirihara to...crush him on his birthday. Yes...*shifty eyes*

Thanks so much!!

[wizli]

Wow, what can I say, I'm still tembling it was so good. Really, really great, even with a pairing I've never even thought before and just perfect for this absolutely frozen afternoon. I wish all tennipuri fics were written like this one, full of excitement and passion but with a great sense of ambientation and characterization. All the little details were great, too.

I'm sure Yanaga will be very happy with a birthday gift like this (who wouldn't! ^^).

[reposoir]

Really? Thank you so much, wizli! And really, it's only appropriate that poor Renji and Kirihara suffer Japanese heat in the summer. It makes them do...crazy things ;)

[chaosmyth]

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

I LOVE this fic. *O* I'm glad it was right at the top of my flist, because I don't check PoT comms that much anymore, but I just COULDN'T miss this. ♥

Thank you!!! *_*

[reposoir]

I don't check comms much either anymore- I don't blame you. ;)

But thank you so much for taking a chance and checking this out. :)