FIC: Victory Spoils, YanaKiri, NC17

[reposte]

I challenged whisper132 to a Drabble-off yesterday, and ended up with this.

Title: Victory Spoils
Author: Ociwen
Rating: NC17
Wordcount: 4100 (oops)
Disclaimer: Konomi owns all
Summary: Renji made a promise to Kirihara. YanaKiri, sorta.
Author's Notes: Written for a "drabbleoff" with Whisper-chan. :D :D :D SPOILERS FOR 338

Comments

[vintersaga]

Seaweed head, gets me giggling everytime! XD

Yanagi and Akaya, and victory smex! ^___^

“But- senpai…you’d win anyways…” Can't argue with that! LoL

[reposoir]

Inui would run home crying when Renji beats him >;D

Thanks, Vintersaga! :)

[pixxers]

I didn't like the characterization here. Canon clearly indicates that Kirihara is the uke since he's younger and shorter. :D :D :D :D I can't believe I even worked up the energy to attempt humor. I'm dying, you know.

♥ Yanagi & Kirihara never held any lure for me whatsoever until you wrote them. Now I look forward to it - even if it's het. XD

I loved this - it was real and vivid and so good. Here's to hoping it will inspire me and help me keep my mind on Ohtori and Shishido when all I really want to write is...well, whatever.

Excellent - as always.

[reposoir]

Het is wrong, Pix. We all know that. ;D ;D

Thanks! &hearts

[reposoir]

Hee! Thanks so much Marks! :D

(Ack, am used to seeing Data Pair everywhere anyway. Fandom prefers it to YanaKiri, so I go on my own personal crusade to undermine the Data Pair shippers ;)

[shikishi]

Aw. Poor Renji-kins, having to suffer being the uke to Kirihara.

:)

Cute fic, A.

[reposoir]

Kirihara will be number one at something.

If not tennis, then maybe sex ;D

Thanks, Kish!

[dystopiarcadia]

Oh. Oh. I think I'm in love *_____*

Seriously, loved the atmosphere in this piece, and well, I <3 YanaKiri so that's even better, and man how awesome is it that people seem to get so inspired by this new chapter and I really should stop ranting but can I say again how amazingly well you rendered the tactile sensations between them, and the heat.. ♥

[reposoir]

which is slightly ironic, because I'm more a visual and not a tactile person myself! ;D ;D

Thanks, dystopiarcadia!