[Fic] Ballad of the Moon : 12b

[rennie_88]

Title: Ballad of the Moon
Pairing: Jaemin, Yoomin 
Length: Chapter 12/22
Genre: fantasy, adventure, angst,drama
Disclaimer: idea based on goose-girl fairy tale ~

Summary: Changmin has no control over his life as he's forced to leave his home to become the escort of the Crown Prince in a faraway land. Before he can even reach his destination, he's

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[rennie_88]

LOLOL oh yes. i might have over done it on the ripping ur heart apart thing TT *offers tape* :3

hmmm?? wait, where all ur emtions came from..? the anxious/relieved/frustrated/impatient... ? :O hehe thats a lota diff things all at once!!

u kno. this whole thing was supposed to be officially yoomin from the beginning thus all the way they see special things in each other like u mentioned, but jaemin got pissed and forced their way in. but do u think the yoomin is still more...first place sorta? cuz i mean at least they'd never hurt each other and are mutually attracted..even tho poor joongies slowly coming around..oh dear, my heart is so split :( *Dies* anway, still havent quite decided exactly on how it all gets revealed. so many possibilities :P

i miss joongie too tho TT need to switch off jaemin yoomin every time cuz dang they both are driving me crazy XDDD huuu its getting longer every time i duno what to do -0-!! i'm taking up so much of ppls time with this lol~

thank u for taking time to leave this monster comment <3 <3 <3 i still have like...um 5 tabs open on our other comments and need to go reply there hahahahaha this is a weekend long project XD LOVE YOU GIRL <3 <3 yes lets fighting !!!!!!!!!!

[yakuso5u]

*sticks heart back together in one pieces sniffing* Thanks... ;~; XD

Lol I dunno where they come from, you tell me, it's all your doing :P

JaeMin forced its way into your story like YooMin forced its way in mine. Makes sense :P So damn competitive, they are XD
Mmmh actually I think the JaeMin feels 'first' at that point... cos Jae clearly mentioned an attraction that was both emotional and physical, and Min started yielding to that pressure too. While the YooMin is progressing slowly, and they just started building something that's not friendship and not love, kinda hard to qualify... you see what I mean?
But I don't think it should be a problem, cos I know you've an idea in mind (more than one, actually :p), and that it'll all end up nicely with YooMin hearts all over the world :P

Commenting marathon!!! Yeaaahhh ^___^/

[rennie_88]

i just wanted to respond to this comment about how jaemin vs yoomin fighting for 'first' and 'second' ~ cuz i think my heart keeps betraying me and making it tip one way and then back the other.. like... its supposed to be yoomin clearly but then jaejoong just crushes it cuz the jaemin is so obvious..even tho i didnt ever really make min understand or really start to like jae in any way yet.. did i?? is there hints of it?? :S i get confused myself cuz so many readers cheer for jaemin and overlook all the negative feelings from him that it affects me back in a circle TT then i feel bad for jaemin and half wana make it work out..LOL what is going onnnnnnnnnnnn~~~~~~~~~~i gota just kick yoomin into romance like NOW keke omo.. wait ch 14 is supposed to have sthg that starts with a ..k..... LALALALALALA!! we shall seeeeeeeee! what is this not friendship not love?? I DONT KNO EITHER !! :B

[yakuso5u]

I think you made it clear that Min felt nothing but fear and hatred towards Jae... but then there are the moments when Jae completely controls him and he can't react as he'd like to... I suppose that's where the pro-JaeMin find hope XD

And I guess it's Jae's possessive streak that makes the JaeMin more "attractive", cos we can't say we dont like that XD But it's also for all the wrong reasons so.... I dunno. I love YooMin so it's not a pb, but let's say you had YunJae instead of YooMin, and I know I'd be cheering for the JaeMin too XD
Maybe you should just warn readers that the JaeMin isn't meant to "win" or smthg? Just to avoid disappointed comments and all that XD

Good luck getting rid of the JaeMin tentacles here! XD They know how to play with our hearts ;____;

[yakuso5u]

Damn... re-re-re-read it just, you know, to get in the mood. Got teary with the very first lines and ending up crying like a fool halfway TT__TT That scene with the horse siiiiiiigh......
I soooooo need to see some light for YooMin here, it's just horribly broken and wasted, and I want them both FREE and HAPPY *sniffs* *blows nose* *gets to part 13*

(YOU DIDN'T TELL ME DARE YOU TO MOVE HAD NEW CHAPPIE!!!! Omggggg akdhjfglehm don't know if self-control will resist tonight O__O)

[rennie_88]

hahaah OMGOD i always do that too! but i got really greedy and reread like 3 chapters before reading ur last update *dreamy sigh*

but i think this chapter really depends on ur mood TT i was super unhappy the day i wrote it so it got all feely..but when i edited it later i thot it was too mopey LOL but im glad that you enjoy it *hugs tight to death*
yoomin will slowly start to get stronger now i think *_* tho they're fighting against the world and then some sigh..

(OMG I ALWAYS GET DISTRACTED BY CHATTING WITH YOU!! HAHAHAHA did the self control happen? :P)