[Fic] Ballad of the Moon : 10

Nov 25, 2012 01:03

Title: Ballad of the Moon
Pairing: Jaemin, Yoomin 
Length: Chapter 10/?
Genre: fantasy, adventure, angst,drama
Disclaimer: idea based on goose-girl fairy tale ~

Summary: Changmin has no control over his life as he's forced to leave his home to become the escort of the Crown Prince in a faraway land. Before he can even reach his destination, he's ( Read more... )

genre: romance, pairing: jaemin, title: moon ballad, genre: fantasy, pairing: yoomin, genre: drama, genre: action, rating: pg-13, genre: au, author: r, genre: angst, length: chapter

Leave a comment

yakuso5u November 25 2012, 01:07:31 UTC
OMG I'm not comment-failing this time!! X'D *proud*

Sorcerer is starting to have waaayyy too much fun with Chunnie's life or soul or whatever it is... *glares*. So the King collapsed eh? Why do I feel like it's not a coincidence? -_-" Things are getting darker...
I looooved the moment when Yoochun realized that slave-Min actually had the gut to punch Jae!! XD And I like that he cares... that he feels responsible too :) I guess in other circumstances I'd have felt angry at him for escaping like this and all, but I don't think you can call it cowardice, when what he's going through is so terrible... :s

Aaaand he didn't forget Minnie. *crazy giggle* X'D

I'm... reluctantly glad that Yoochun has Junsu to take care of him. Chunnie obviously needs comfort and a friendly presence. Though that doesn't excuse anything. It'll probably come as a huuuuge shock when the truth about Junsu will be revealed, betrayal and all and damn... I hope it'll make Chunnie want to glomps his Min and protect him foreveeer and hide him in the bubble, or other things like that XDDDD

Cold mist thing is scary, but I've lost count of all the scary things that Sorcerer can do... like, he knows how to hit people right where they are insecure or hurt, and that's quite terrifying. Maybe because Min is both a strong and lonely person, that's why he can resist better?? *over-analyzing brain ON again* X'DDDD

Now I'm most curious about that: I see no reason to keep him from you. Just know, if you displease me...it will be your fault he dies. >>>> SOOOOOO Sorcerer allowed Jae to do whatever he wants with Min????!!!!! O___O TELL ME I UNDERSTOOD IT RIGHT!! Lol omg as much as I dislike Jae, I want JaeMin, and angsty JaeMin is much better than angsty SorcererJaeMin asjdgfkfl (it makes sense right??? Tell me it makes sense... *cries*)

I really have no idea of what's going to happen next... O__o Makes me anxious and giddy and excited, I can't wait for the next update alreadyyy!! *big pleading eyes*
Thank you so much for this chapter! It kinda opens the door to many many questions and possibilities and tentacles are happy tonight XD *hugs tiiiight* (oh... and I wanna say... I hope we'll see more of Yunho later in the story? I kinda miss him... he's Min's only support after all >_<)

Reply

rennie_88 November 25 2012, 04:24:01 UTC
(ok i think im gona reply to all ur love in backwards order! 8D) kk

hehehe of course there are no coincidences ! everything is evil plot and plan and scheme and messy :) thats how it shud be right? ~~ i'll prolly have a hollywood movie-moment and let the sorcerer reveal all his plans to everyone right before the big climax? lmao!
tho.. hopefully i can work it out that chunnie gets drawn in by min's strength and influenced by it and changes cuz of it the same as joongie does, but with a totally opposite different result. :) anyway he has a lot of time to think about dear min and make up for running..tho he wouldn't have been able to do anything in that situation right... :S

as for junsu~ i wasnt planning on having his pov. but it just worked out~ and really, he's honestly true to chunnie and they work together like this. even tho he's not exactly chunnie's type *giggle* :P and even tho theres a big ugly secret that he wont be able to hide forever :P PUAHAHAHA! yoochun's reaction to the betrayal yes and probably duckbutt going crazy the poor dear :) omg i need to hurry and write it cuz i waana make it exciting *_*

trying not to run out of ideas for the magical stuffs :S tho definitely min's extraordinarily special. howw could he not be? XDD sooo biased lalala~

as for the last line of the sorcerer... it could be for joongie or chunnie :P eitherway angsty jaemin AND angsty yoomin. okay? LOL!!i cant resist you, i'll have to give u what u want <3 <3 <3

omg kill me but i already wrote next chap. its just too long and wordy and all stuck in changmin's head.. so i gota butcher it up a bit before i let u see it TT!! *imagining u with puss in boots eyes.glompinggHUGGGSSSSS*

thank u for ur lovely comment and reactions and encouragements <3 <3 ur the best <3<3 :D (yeah im trying to bring it back around for yunho to reappear ~ tho this is getting crazy long of course and it might be a little wait -0- i miss him too..why dont u just fulfill and comfort our aching homin hearts with sometihnng ELSE instead??????????????????????????????? *_* *army of grabby toes knocking on ur door and petting ur tentacles EW* LOLOLOL!)

Reply

yakuso5u December 11 2012, 15:22:40 UTC
(look at me... I promised myself I'd reply comment spam quickly and it has been two weeks........ *major FAIL* >_<)

I love it when everything is evil and twisted and I know the end will be a happy endiiiiing!! Sappy-Angsty, deadly combo! XDDDD
Hollywood moment if fine... big bad guy laughing in the face of nice heroes and unraveling all his plans, and then gets shot in the head in the middle of a 'mwahaha' thing. If it was in the jungle, he'd slip on a banana and die in the most ridiculous way ever, but that's not the jungle... TTTTT

I want the YooSu confrontation alreadyyyyy (can you believe that I've had your updates opened in a tab all this time BUT THAT I HAVENT READ THEM YET COS I WANTED TO ANSWER COMMENT SPAM BEFORE??? *cries* Waaaeee am I doing that to myself????)

I see you wanting me to get into HoMin's world FAST and omg it's horrible girl... I keep having more ideas for that fantsy something plot and it's going in all directions, needs to stop tentacles algfhlm!!! (btw, what happened to TRuman show idea?? *crazy giggles*).

Reply

rennie_88 December 12 2012, 12:47:25 UTC
(:O realy? only felt like.. few days.. o-o time on lj is so warped )

sappy-angst is the new thing. we will do it justice!
LOL shot in the head hehe so fun ~ bananahahahahahahha omg.. why is the jungle such lovely crack? :) we'll just have to have a different baddie in the jungle.. like a tiger-man or sthg ..= =;;

hahahah OMGOSH i do the exact same thing though. of course. hahahahaha and then spend so much time trying to make the perfect replies to comments and suddenly its way late and alphas telling me to turn off the comp TTTTTTTTt! lol why do we do that? our painful motivation to comment lol

YES I DO TTTTTTTTTTTTTTt!! ii keep thinking about it cuz i kno u would write it perfect exactly how im dying for it to be *_* and need some good homin *gushing* but for now just gather all the ideas u can and who knows what it will turn into when u start writing finally *_* ooohohoho high hopesss for the lovely homin <3 <3 (truman show idea is in need of some tentacle action cuz its missing um a POINT lololol )

Reply


Leave a comment

Up