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renisanz

fic: Back Home [Prologue]

Mar 26, 2008 16:07

TITLE: Back Home - PrologueAUTHOR: renisanz
SUMMARY: A sequel to "Making Up the Past"
CATEGORY: romance, drama (Ronon/Keller)
RATING: PG-13
WORDS: 1,300
DISCLAIMER: I don't own these characters, but they're fun to play.
NOTES: This isn't going to make any sense unless you read "Making Up the Past". Then, check out "Blush" for a prelude to this scene. ( Read more... )

fan: fic, series: making up the past, pairing: ronon/keller, character: ronon dex, character: jennifer keller, fandom: sga

Comments 11

mercy4vr March 27 2008, 05:50:06 UTC

I love following their continuing story. You write the characters very well maiking it easy to picture them!

renisanz March 27 2008, 13:04:07 UTC

I appreciate you following along with their story. And to think, I only thought I'd have just written one story and nothing else. So I'm glad you're enjoying my writings about them, and that I portray them well. :)

emesque March 27 2008, 17:31:31 UTC

I just started reading your Making Up the Past series and have to say I'm loving it. The only thing that could make it better would be more of it :D Keep up the good work!

renisanz March 27 2008, 18:41:41 UTC

Thanks so much. I'll try not to disappoint. :)

Love it! anonymous March 27 2008, 18:15:41 UTC

I've loved seeing the additions to this series! Please continue! <>

vingeslag March 27 2008, 18:41:38 UTC

Oh, nice. You make them so cute!
I hope they marry and stuff soon...

And oh, cheers to you for not letting them "perform intercourse". Not that it's wrong, but it's nice to read something that doesn't make them seem like porn stars, if you get me.

Anyways, please continue writing this series! I loved "Making Up The Past" (which actually made me start listening to Adele! Thanks for that), "Blush" and this one.

renisanz March 27 2008, 19:03:50 UTC

Oh gosh. Your praise is making me blush. I'm very glad you read the other stories and liked this one as well.

As for them "performing intercouse" (you slay me with your terminology), well, there's already enough of that type of fic out there. So, I'm glad you appreciate this.

Now, if only I can manage to get these two out of bed by next chapter. They seem to be really comfortable there, it's gonna be tough. . .

funkyinfishnet March 28 2008, 22:34:03 UTC

This is so pretty. I love the discussion of names, the meanings of Ronon's (both song of joy and protector are so perfect for him), and the hot kiss at the end. It's like the two of them are sweetly drawing ever closer to each other and Ronon asking when he's gonna meet Jennifer's dad killed me. Great way to finish the chapter. I look forward to reading more :- )

renisanz March 29 2008, 05:01:01 UTC

Thanks so much!

"Hot kiss", huh? And to think, I actually thought I was holding back as far as describing it, or could have gone with more detail. I guess "less is more" worked out in this case. :) I'm glad you liked the end as well. I guess I should get to work on the next chapter. . .