fic: Making Up the Past [1/6]

[renisanz]

TITLE: Making Up the Past

AUTHOR: renisanz

SUMMARY: "There is a reason why the people of Earth should not drink the wine."

CATEGORY: romance/drama (Ronon/Keller)

RATING: PG-13

NOTES: Written for the

Comments

[daisyscrapper]

Nice job! I had to laugh at the Serenity reference! Too funny!

[renisanz]

Thanks. I couldn't resist the Serenity reference. I'm glad you liked the story. :)

[little_giddy]

Very much enjoyed this :) You've got a few typos I couldn't help but notice, but on the whole it's very, very nice - the middle scene in her bedroom stands out for the characters, and I can't wait to see where you're going next.

Loved the Serenity reference *grin*

Btw, if you'd like to tell some other shippers who don't use LJ about this fic, there's a comm for R/K you can link at: http://community.livejournal.com/ronon_keller/ :)

[renisanz]

Yeah, I'll have to read over this again and fix those before posting it anywhere else. I'm actually a member of the ronon_keller comm.

Thanks for reading. I really struggled with that middle scene, to it's great it came out enjoyable in the end. :)

[renisanz]

Thanks so much. :D The next part is gonna be a doozy to write. . .

What was your favorite part of the story so far?

[renisanz]

". . .this was one of my many Ronon/Keller prompts that I gave for the choc_fic challenge. . ."

Oh rly? I was wondering who came up with this one. Did you give the one about Ronon in Earth clothes, too?

[renisanz]

Thanks for reading. As for the Serenity reference. . .I couldn't resist. Glad you liked it. :)

[colorguard_06]

lovely! loved the Serenity refrence had me giggling! more please! :-D

[renisanz]

Thanks. A lot of people got a kick out of that joke. :)